Reviews for Magic Trix
Draco Oblivion chapter 1 . 3/3
I had to chuckle at the fact he was married
Wow, you've made Mike, the series' joke, actually desirable. Have to appreciate someone bucking of the chains of fanon norm
So he's a gay possibly repressed bisexual, I love this, we need more of you in this world
Loving the sheer depth of this AU with the wolves, witches, vampires, aware humans and how they all interact
Jasper, for being the coven's head of security, is pretty reckless isn't he? Always felt his was the most ominous and invasive ability in their family. His age really is showing if he's so cocky as to think he can just get away with manipulating everyone's emotions
Aw this is pretty awesome. Love this world you've created, definitely the most interesting large scale Twilight AU I've found
Fredrick Bismarck chapter 1 . 8/30/2015
World seems very rich in this story. I wish you would explore it more. Lots lore, mythology, and politics. There's definitely some sex appeal as well. I don't quite understand how this bastion of the supernatural came to be and how it functions in the mundane society outside the state. Love the cover for this story.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2015
Interesting read. Looking forward to the next chapter.
GISA103 chapter 1 . 3/29/2015
Loved please you could totally up date this tale :) pleaseeee
Guest chapter 1 . 3/29/2015
OH MY GOD, this is absolutely amazing, literally this idea is the best, your writing is awesome PLS pls pls update this!
theronjohn325 chapter 1 . 1/21/2015
It's interesting change, I'd love to hear more, so update soon.
idoadore chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
Wonderful start! I'd love to see any world-building that happens and also to learn more about the magic system/other supernatural creatures. Hope to see more :)
walrai chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
this story idea is amazing, your a quality writer Aswell so this story will be so intense cannot wait for more, please update soon
Matthias Stormcrow chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
Cool opening I love it what is gonna happen next.
xhumanfilthx chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
This is amazing! Please dear Gods allow this amazing writer to continue! I will be making an offering to the muses tonight in hopes that they sing to you and help you to continue this story! I'm now going to find the best cattle and ox I can in Middle Georgia. Away!
I heart vamps chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
Please update soon
Zefeh chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
Judging from the picture you used as a "Cover" for this story, I immediately thought that you HAD to know where the picture came from (ie - Deviantart - Sunstone comic by shiniez) and after reading 3 of your 4 fanfiction's I realize why I love your stories. If you do know about those comic's then you might see that you incorporate some kind of interplay between Bella and xPerson that reminds me of the kind of BDSM relationship Allie and Lisa have in Sunstone. I love your stories and noticed you haven't written/updated since September and really wish you keep these stories updated. I'd really like to see a Squeal to "Lustful Thoughts" (Wow, that's got a bunch of common ground in Sunstone now that I think about it . . . ) and "A Beast Unto Herself", "Magic Trix", and "A Paw In Each World" are all amazing stories! I'm dying for updates! . Hope the review makes ya come back! If your in college I can understand the slump of writing but put something up on your profile to keep your follower's up-to-date. These stories are amazing! :D Keep up the creativity in the world!
cerberus321 chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
very good and very interesting
AnFri chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
I think you could have warned me that you have another amazing story besides "a beast unto herself" on your profile ! This is really great, I loved Alices and Bellas Latex / PVC banter and Jakes mating ritual. Where do you come up with such amazing ideas ? Enough said, I love another one of your storys time to start the second chapter.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
a bientot
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