Reviews for saving nny
Guest chapter 17 . 8/10/2017
I was hoping after a 2 year break you would have improved. I was wrong. You still SUCK!

You are a horrible writer.
Hopeless fan chapter 17 . 5/7/2017
The human chapter 17 . 9/2/2016
Good story, wish there was more but I'm feeling like that is unlikely because it's been a few years. There are not enough decent jthm fics on this site sadly.
Guest chapter 16 . 11/6/2015
This is very difficult to read. Please go back and add in paragraphs.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/6/2015
This writing appears to be better proofread and is much easier to read. Thank you.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2015
I highly recommend that you get someone to proofread your stories.

There are multiple spelling and grammar mistakes throughout.

The lack of paragraphs and the lack of white space between paragraphs makes it difficult to read.

You need to work on capitalization. Catmagnent
Madness chapter 16 . 1/5/2015
OptimusPrimegirl213 chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
awe u love those two keep up the good work i really want to see more of this so dont give up yet okay keep up all the nice work for this two
ashen snowflake chapter 16 . 6/3/2014
*happy sounds at new chapter*
JokerCarnage5 chapter 16 . 5/24/2014
Its pretty good. Sometimes the writting is a bit hard to follow and I didnt like that some of the earlier chapters was just rehaching the same stuff (with Squee being kidnapped and then saved) but the later chapters became much better. The entire family thing going on with Nny, Squee & Devi is just awsome.
randomplotbunny chapter 16 . 4/1/2014
Very nice. I am truely enjoying this story and can't wait for the next chapter!
Guest chapter 15 . 3/8/2014
Please let nny see squee soon! The suspense is killing me!
ashen snowflake chapter 15 . 2/17/2014
*whispers* Hey, y'know what would be awesome...? An update to this spectacular story...
Guest chapter 15 . 2/11/2014
Please make another chapterrrrrrrr! I'm addicted! T-to your writing of corse! Ha ha... Ok bad joke I'm Neva ever going to joke again. NEVER!
ashen snowflake chapter 2 . 1/17/2014
I see that my previous comment was unneeded. XD

This was much better written, and I can't wait to read more chapters! :3
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