Reviews for saving nny
Guest chapter 16 . 11/6
This is very difficult to read. Please go back and add in paragraphs.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/6
This writing appears to be better proofread and is much easier to read. Thank you.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/6
I highly recommend that you get someone to proofread your stories.

There are multiple spelling and grammar mistakes throughout.

The lack of paragraphs and the lack of white space between paragraphs makes it difficult to read.

You need to work on capitalization. Catmagnent
Madness chapter 16 . 1/5
OptimusPrimegirl213 chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
awe u love those two keep up the good work i really want to see more of this so dont give up yet okay keep up all the nice work for this two
ashen snowflake chapter 16 . 6/3/2014
*happy sounds at new chapter*
JokerCarnage5 chapter 16 . 5/24/2014
Its pretty good. Sometimes the writting is a bit hard to follow and I didnt like that some of the earlier chapters was just rehaching the same stuff (with Squee being kidnapped and then saved) but the later chapters became much better. The entire family thing going on with Nny, Squee & Devi is just awsome.
randomplotbunny chapter 16 . 4/1/2014
Very nice. I am truely enjoying this story and can't wait for the next chapter!
Guest chapter 15 . 3/8/2014
Please let nny see squee soon! The suspense is killing me!
ashen snowflake chapter 15 . 2/17/2014
*whispers* Hey, y'know what would be awesome...? An update to this spectacular story...
Guest chapter 15 . 2/11/2014
Please make another chapterrrrrrrr! I'm addicted! T-to your writing of corse! Ha ha... Ok bad joke I'm Neva ever going to joke again. NEVER!
ashen snowflake chapter 2 . 1/17/2014
I see that my previous comment was unneeded. XD

This was much better written, and I can't wait to read more chapters! :3
ashen snowflake chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
I love the story, but I have a few suggestions about your writing style.

I find it difficult to read, as there are almost no paragraph skips. Splitting up the paragraphs into smaller ones may help readers follow the story line better. Then there is the matter of the dialogue.

It also seems cramped, as if there are no spaces separating them. As a fellow writer, I want you to have more views, but the intimidating blocks of writing, while amazing and perfectly worded save for a few minor typos, may scare away some more "sensitive" readers.

Anyways, that's just my opinion on the very first chapter. I love the story thus far, though!
Guest chapter 14 . 12/23/2013
so cool I love how u made schmee evil and not part of squee like and psychodoughboy. love it.
Brimma chapter 14 . 11/11/2013
Oh I love this story and I look forward to an update!
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