Reviews for May He Never Change
lilyflower1345 chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
great story! I really enjoyed this. Everyone seemed in character to me. Thanks for writing !
dr4g0ngrl chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
I liked this! I know it's been done, but I love reveals especially ones where Arthur gets to see Merlin's strength of character as well as his power in magic. Especially with a hearty helping of hurt/comfort. Nicely done! Keep up the good work. I, for one, would like to see what you would do with a part two to this.

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natcel chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
this was great. trust me you cant have to much whump, loved would love more.
Leonarema chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
May you continue this... Yes, it works as a one-shot but I would love to see more! A very interesting version of a reveal. And the characters were in character.
Kalia of Camelot chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
This was an awesome story :) well done and thanks!
huntersandhalos chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
Great job! I really enjoyed reading this and don't worry, your characters are IC :)
georgiaj3 chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Great story! Can't wait for the second part.
Felicity P chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
squeeee! soooo awesome. loved it! What a wonderful piece, thank you for sharing! :)
Moon Fox chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
You have a very captivating writing style that I really enjoy. I'd love to see a companion to this.
tlw13 chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Second part, please! this was really good, not too OOC, though Arthur took it all a little too well, I think, even with the torture.
kitkat chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
I love it! I definitely want to read the companion piece to this! I Don't worry , I thought your characters were very IN character. I was expecting this to be a full on reveal fic with the first chapter as an intro, and I was excited(but sad bcause I'd have to wait for you to finish the story!) but then I was reading and I was like yes! first chapter reveal! Then it was over... sniff... but I thought it was a perfect length. You didn't draw it out to much, but it felt like time was passing an it took me long enough to read that I could take the time to enjoy it! Short reveal oneshots never seem to do it for me. Anyways, I thought this was great! I hope you decide to post the next part!
FlYiNgPiGlEtS chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Aw... I loved it :)
The reveal and hurt/comfort was great. Even though she was kind of a bad guy, I quite liked the sorceress. I also liked it when Merlin was all "well, if people stopped attacking Arthur with magic, perhaps he'd been more accepting" - very funny and very true! :D
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