Reviews for May He Never Change |
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![]() ![]() ![]() great story! I really enjoyed this. Everyone seemed in character to me. Thanks for writing ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this! I know it's been done, but I love reveals especially ones where Arthur gets to see Merlin's strength of character as well as his power in magic. Especially with a hearty helping of hurt/comfort. Nicely done! Keep up the good work. I, for one, would like to see what you would do with a part two to this. dr4g0ngrl |
![]() ![]() this was great. trust me you cant have to much whump, loved would love more. |
![]() ![]() May you continue this... Yes, it works as a one-shot but I would love to see more! A very interesting version of a reveal. And the characters were in character. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an awesome story :) well done and thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job! I really enjoyed reading this and don't worry, your characters are IC :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Can't wait for the second part. |
![]() ![]() ![]() squeeee! soooo awesome. loved it! What a wonderful piece, thank you for sharing! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have a very captivating writing style that I really enjoy. I'd love to see a companion to this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Second part, please! this was really good, not too OOC, though Arthur took it all a little too well, I think, even with the torture. |
![]() ![]() I love it! I definitely want to read the companion piece to this! I Don't worry , I thought your characters were very IN character. I was expecting this to be a full on reveal fic with the first chapter as an intro, and I was excited(but sad bcause I'd have to wait for you to finish the story!) but then I was reading and I was like yes! first chapter reveal! Then it was over... sniff... but I thought it was a perfect length. You didn't draw it out to much, but it felt like time was passing an it took me long enough to read that I could take the time to enjoy it! Short reveal oneshots never seem to do it for me. Anyways, I thought this was great! I hope you decide to post the next part! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw... I loved it :) The reveal and hurt/comfort was great. Even though she was kind of a bad guy, I quite liked the sorceress. I also liked it when Merlin was all "well, if people stopped attacking Arthur with magic, perhaps he'd been more accepting" - very funny and very true! :D |