Reviews for Vampire Imprint
Sesflynn chapter 7 . 4/1
Oh gosh! I love where this is going. If I may say something though? It's moving a wee bit slow. I like how you are covering all bases with flash backs and such, but it's a wee bit drawn out.
I think it would make things interesting if Miley somehow gets hurt, but The Major gains control of Jasper and helps her. And maybe emphasise the major being fiercely protective.
Thanks for updating! I truly mean no harm in the comment! Please take no offence! Keep up the awesome chapters!
Sesity Airr Flynn
Sadie Pearce chapter 7 . 3/2
Please update again soon and I reckon everything should go smoothly but Rosalie should like her a lot more than Bella
XDImagineMe15XD chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
Seth and her should be mated it'd be cut and funny human with a wolf with vampire parents...Yay!
Emily chapter 7 . 9/30/2014
She coyld fall and hurt herself and then the major comes out
Emily chapter 7 . 9/20/2014
Please please please write another chapter in this i LOVE this book and i want to see what happens please write more
Vinny chapter 7 . 9/16/2014
Please more more more please
Emily chapter 7 . 7/12/2014
I,think the major should come out AFTER Miley falls and gets hurt
I'm Feeling Random chapter 7 . 2/26/2014
I was hoping for the next chapter maybe you could have Jaspers demon come out when someone imprints or claims she is his singer. All I know is that, this by far is a great story. Please update :D
sparkle-glitter-and-fly-on chapter 7 . 11/17/2013
I want something at least semi-bad to happen. I don't really care what, but it should be something. You also should have it in jasper's pov. That would just about make my day.
SuperWhoLockgirl222 chapter 7 . 9/14/2013
The Major should come out scaring Miley who then falls and scraps her causing her to bleed and Carlise to find out she is his singer. Love this story
The pricness of the darkness chapter 7 . 9/13/2013
can write some more of this story because it's very good and i love it
Ravenna nightxxx chapter 7 . 8/24/2013
It's really good so far.

Personally I think that she should hurt herself and then the major comes out to help her to show the more loving and caring side he has towards his imprint.
USANAguy chapter 7 . 8/21/2013
I like your story! The plot is interesting!
bella chapter 7 . 8/18/2013
I think jaspers demon would be cool
FallenButNotYetBroken chapter 6 . 8/15/2013
I really like the story I do agree it should progress more instead of going over everyones POV. I understand what you are trying to do but you could do that in one chapter not have more than 2 chapters of repetitive story telling. Other than that this is a good story I like the concept. Please do not make this into a Harry Potter crossover if you still had that idea this story doesn't need to be a crossover. If you make this an imprint story with the wolves as well I'm curious to see how whoever you choose can coexist with Alice and Jasper having imprinted on Miley as well.
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