|Reviews for Vampire Imprint|
| I'm Feeling Random chapter 7 . 2/26
I was hoping for the next chapter maybe you could have Jaspers demon come out when someone imprints or claims she is his singer. All I know is that, this by far is a great story. Please update :D
| sparkle-glitter-and-fly-on chapter 7 . 11/17/2013
I want something at least semi-bad to happen. I don't really care what, but it should be something. You also should have it in jasper's pov. That would just about make my day.
| SuperWhoLockgirl222 chapter 7 . 9/14/2013
The Major should come out scaring Miley who then falls and scraps her causing her to bleed and Carlise to find out she is his singer. Love this story
| The pricness of the darkness chapter 7 . 9/13/2013
can write some more of this story because it's very good and i love it
| Ravenna nightxxx chapter 7 . 8/24/2013
It's really good so far.
Personally I think that she should hurt herself and then the major comes out to help her to show the more loving and caring side he has towards his imprint.
| USANAguy chapter 7 . 8/21/2013
I like your story! The plot is interesting!
| bella chapter 7 . 8/18/2013
I think jaspers demon would be cool
| FallenButNotYetBroken chapter 6 . 8/15/2013
I really like the story I do agree it should progress more instead of going over everyones POV. I understand what you are trying to do but you could do that in one chapter not have more than 2 chapters of repetitive story telling. Other than that this is a good story I like the concept. Please do not make this into a Harry Potter crossover if you still had that idea this story doesn't need to be a crossover. If you make this an imprint story with the wolves as well I'm curious to see how whoever you choose can coexist with Alice and Jasper having imprinted on Miley as well.
| SparkBomb'sFaith chapter 8 . 8/15/2013
The concept of the story is very unique it's only the delivery of the story that needs some improvement. E.g. Bella is rather Out of character..
| SparkBomb'sFaith chapter 4 . 8/15/2013
You should let the story progress and not keep going over the same period of time in different POVs.
When you read a book, no author does that. So why would you?
It brings the reader out of the story and gets boring.
Just decide what pic you want personally then write the story. Do not keep repeating.
And PLEASE stop asking the reader what they think should happen next in the story. As the author it is your choice and its only up to you. No real author asks what should happen. They decide.
| SparkBomb'sFaith chapter 3 . 8/15/2013
You should let the story progress and not go over the same space
| FallenAshe chapter 8 . 8/15/2013
The major should come out when he meets Miley! For her future love life she should have a wolf imprint on her! I really like this! Please update soon!
| samantha dalton chapter 8 . 8/14/2013
i love it... cant wait to read more.. the next chapter should be when Miley meets the Cullens
| kadee son 12345 chapter 8 . 8/14/2013
update soon please
| Debbie93 chapter 7 . 7/26/2013