Reviews for Taking the Next Step
14hpgirl19 chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
I love all the layers you've added to this universe. It's really come a long way and it's so interesting to read!

Great story!
TogetherForever1 chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
So cute! Jack is smart.
LithiumFlower13 chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
sweet. is there one with henry?
Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
I love your work especially this saga
JoanIncarnate chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
what happened to will?
Ulimo chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Jack is one smart kid. Good to know that he'll be able to call out to the Team if anything goes wrong.

What happened to Will? I got the impression that he's no longer there, like he and JJ separated or something.

I can't wait to read more from the Shadows Within Saga!

Until next time,

Ulimo
shelly.hoffer.7 chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
nice addition! I really like the "connection" thing!
Heart'sRose chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
I really liked it :)
Kiba515 chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
awesomeness
as usual
love this series
HeartsDragon chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Oh i can't wait to hear more about Jack and Henry :)
Just out of curiosity what happened with Will? And did Clooney join them?
Can't wait for more!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
Oooh! Jack and Henry? This just gets better.
MJ chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
yes! the kids are great in this! the mansion thing was an interesting move-but the kids are where I would like to see this go.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Still loving your story line and Jack and Henry are both adorable. It may take awhile for updates, but readers are willing to wait when the writing is good and the storyline is interesting. You have both going for you. Thanks for the update.
gabbygirl89 chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
Great! Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Sarai chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
Cute story. Best one yet.
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