Reviews for The Madness Within
X chapter 1 . 8/22/2014
Yep I reread the end and I think I got it. Near died and Mello turned into Madness, which also explains Him seeing dead Near talking to him.
X chapter 1 . 8/22/2014
Or you made it to not make sense on purpose, because Mello turned into Madness.
Did he?
X chapter 1 . 8/22/2014
OK! I loved the story except I didn't understand the ending. Its didn't really make sense.
Naoki-Kitty chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
I will say it does get a bit confusing near the end of the story but I re-read it and it made a bit more sense. Excellent story, 5/5 stars :3
Rieul chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Wow. THAT WAS AMAZING! Was that a hint of Near and Matt? OooO
Anyways: This was exciting, a bit sad at the end. Did Near die and Mello became another Madness? I got lost for a moment. You do amazing work. Keep it up!