Shepard's Breaking

Anytime things seem to be going her way, I swear

I love how you slowly stray farther and farther from main storyline

Ugh, is shepard the only one who doesnt fuck everything up

I thought Miranda might have been betraying Shepard at first, I was half right, she betrayed someone. :)

Shepard:-fp- That's it! I figured it out
Saren:What are you talking about?!
She:Why the reapers haven't exterminated you yet!
Sar:It is because they see m-
She:They only exterminate intelligent life forms!
Sar:...
She:...
Sar:...
Everyone else:Fucking roasted

one of the best stories out there along with the fact that this is my 5 or 6 read through its still as amazing as the first time..

Okay, so, this is a cool idea, but it moves far too fast. Jane may be a grizzled Spectre who's fought a galactic war, but even she would be confused, surprised, and maybe even a little scared. I don't think it's quite logical for her to just be thrust into it and immediately take charge of things. Also, I don't know if it would be wise for her to just start spouting advice like a prophet. She wants to help, yes, but she doesn't want to arouse too much suspicion.

You've done great besides that. Besides, I'm only on the first chapter; things could very well change.

I'm so excited to see what happens next! Hopefully everything is going well, it's been a while since you updated. Thank you for your hard work!

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What

i noticed it before, but since you mentioned it in the AN, i have to ask: WHY? why in the world would anyone create a crossover between Fallout and My Little Pony? seriously.

noticed a slight error. the name of the Asari you help Thane kill in ME was Nassana Dantius, not Meiita.

though at this point in time she's probably still sitting in a bar on the citadel, waiting to try and trick a specter into murdering her sister Dahlia for her.

Fun fact! There is a canonical mass effect way to upload yourself to a computer - check out the 'Virtual aliens' wikia page.

...sorry, saw that mention at the beginning and was just WAIT WAIT THATS A THING.

This is a masterpiece! I love it so much! Can't wait to see how the next chapter goes! And good luck with your other fic!

I know I'm totally late to the Mass Effect party but I have to say I'm really enjoying this story even though I'm only on chapter 18. I really appreciate the twists and turns and crazy FemShep :)