I am seriously concerned with Shep's stress levels. You make it real with stuff like that, though, ya know?

Kickass fight scene.

This chapter. Is awesome. I love how well you characterize Mordin and his speech patterns. He was always one of my favorites. Shep's so badass. So much going on in this chapter! Love it.

Oh god. So who wins the pool? It's Ash, right?

So George Sulu cracked me up - George Takei and Hilaru Sulu? Nice tag to a great man.

I want to know who called the Elcor. Haha! Oh man. So good. And seriously, "badassly?" I choked on my own spit.

You so rock.

Finally. I missed you, EDI. Looking forward to her and Joker hopefully having puntastic arguments and getting together.

Shep keeps getting punched in the face. Ha! Lovely to see Thane again. Liara sounds so young...

Growing romantic interactions!

I'm excited to see Kasumi again.

Awesome! What a fantastic part of the story, the whole bit on the Migrant Fleet. I particularly liked Legion revealing the question that started the whole debacle.

Hi, Shep's mom! This is AWESOME.

This here, this chapter, proves how good a writer you are. Shep's gone back in time. She has knowledge of a potential future and enemies and possible allies, but her choices have consequences and she can't win without casualties. And it's not just nameless soldiers on the ground or in ships. We just lost people we've known since go, and it hurts, but there's a price to be paid, and that's just damn good writing.

Next time someone tells me to pick a number, it's totally gonna be Pi. Love it. Fantastic chapter. I appreciate that Garrus and the others don't immediately trust in everything Shep says. That makes a good team and it makes it more believable. Love her having the Geth alter their colors. Nice name choice, too.

Omg, that scene with Jane picking on Pressly had me cackling with laughter. So awesome. And yay! They're going to Rannoch! I feel so happy for Tali.

So they made peace with the Geth in Shep's prior life? She isn't mentioning that Tali killed herself over it. :(

Beautiful speech. TIM is an arse. Miranda has never been a favorite of mine but you write her well. I enjoy the humor you put in your work. And yay, Victus! I have a thing for Turians. *sigh*

Curiosity: is Shep's physical description purposely vague to allow us to mentally design her ourselves? Clever tactic.

Good! Hopefully a plan that keeps Ash or Kaidan from getting killed. The first time I played it and got Kaidan killed, I about died of grief. Looking forward to this.

Also, hell yes, cameo by Vega!

It's Mordin! I'm so happy! I had an adorable crush on his character. Fabulous interactions, I'm enjoying that he doesn't believe yet what he did about the Phage in ME3. You're an incredibly talented writer.

"Hackett out." Hahaha! I about choked on my own tongue laughing. I love your characterizations and everything.