Reviews for Chronicles of the Drowned City
Musicstarnc chapter 26 . 4/27/2014
OMG First let me say this story is quite the awesome thing so far and I'm loving the characters. Secondly, let me say that you're fight scenes are not horrible. I have seen better, but I have also seen FAR worse and yours are relatively enjoyable to read. I gotta say I never thought I'd get addicted to a fanfic but yours is addictive and I NEED MORE! *flails arms around uselessly for some reason* Also, now I REALLY wanna play this one. All I've been doing is level grinding on my EO4 demo and as fun as the battles are in this game I thought that same thing about Pokemon at first and I now I find level grinding in that series to be boring. Anywho, I freaking love what you've done with this so far and can't wait for more! Though, I must say one thing and that is I find it a biit hard to keep track of who's saying what. It's probably just me but I figured I wouldn't be properly "reviewing" (according to my english teacher anyway) did I not say one thing that could be improved. Still love this tho, you're a pretty awesome writer, keep up the good work, friend! :D
b.P0d chapter 4 . 2/11/2014
She's so blind! Yuki-san, you be nice to Zakharia!
b.P0d chapter 3 . 2/10/2014
They missed the building on the hill. So funny!
dreadgar2 chapter 25 . 2/6/2014
There's a lot of emotional development in this chapter. Cia is shaping up nicely.
Yuki: Cia! I am your brother!
Everyone: NOOOOO!
Dreadgar2: so thats why you two were together in the first place!
b.P0d chapter 2 . 2/5/2014
Thanks for reviewing my story! I like the story and characters. Adisa is nice.
dreadgar2 chapter 24 . 2/1/2014
I always wanted to ask this.
* lightning starts to hit the background * what path are you going to choose in the story?
dreadgar2 chapter 23 . 1/26/2014
Chitose is definitely one of the more interesting characters. hmm ... I guess i wont be able to add more details to Adisa in the special. oh well.
Sketchy Tetra chapter 3 . 1/22/2014
Aw, Zakaria is so adorable! These new characters, I'm eager to learn more of them, specifically Cia since she hadn't much of an intro yet!
Sketchy Tetra chapter 2 . 1/22/2014
Heh, Heinrich seems a serious character, kind of like a body guard! Adisa sounds fun, a light hearted character!
Sketchy Tetra chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
Oooo! * hence the mystery*
dreadgar2 chapter 22 . 1/19/2014
that's a nice picture.
OLYMPIA THAT BITCH! I KEPT CLOSING THE DS JUST TO REPEAT THE FIGHT WITH HER! AND YET ... I still want to recruit her.* sweat drop *
dreadgar2 chapter 21 . 12/31/2013
happy new year!
wow, its gritting rather crowded.
dreadgar2 chapter 19 . 12/21/2013
damn! ...your making me hungry with this honey talk...*licks lip*
good to see that your performance didn't change, keep it up.
dreadgar2 chapter 18 . 12/21/2013
good to see you again.
looks like the story is advancing nicely...WAIT! IS THAT ANOTHER CHAPTER! *types the next button*
dreadgar2 chapter 17 . 12/6/2013
wildling development sure is fun.
for a quest chapter, this was pretty good. keep up the good work.
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