|Reviews for My Version|
| sassyfriend chapter 14 . 8/6/2014
I really enjoyed this
| sassyfriend chapter 6 . 8/6/2014
Thank you I love angst Legolas and Aragorn
| sassyfriend chapter 5 . 8/6/2014
I really hope they can help Legolas
| sassyfriend chapter 4 . 8/6/2014
I love this
| sassyfriend chapter 3 . 8/6/2014
I think this is really a great way to tell this part
| sassyfriend chapter 2 . 8/6/2014
I don't think our stubborn friend is fine either
| sassyfriend chapter 1 . 8/6/2014
I really hope Legolas is ok
| thishazeleyeddemon chapter 2 . 11/13/2013
I feel I should mention anachronistic speech and beige prose. You have potential, though. I won't say this is the worst I've ever read. You could do with a little work on it though. May I suggest reading the trilogy and perhaps the Silmarillion, if you haven't?
| thishazeleyeddemon chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
The name for said "sea monster" is the Watcher in the Water. Where is the sea for it to be a monster of? Also, Gimli, too busy boasting to notice the corpses of his friends and kinsfolk, and the smell of their dead bodies.
| LotR-HP-PJ chapter 14 . 11/13/2013
-YES AN UPDATE! YAYAYAYAYAY! It has been SO long! It's nice to see you again!
-Yeah endings are hard.
-I did enjoy it!
-I can't wait to read your next story!
| Storytime-Nightwish chapter 13 . 6/29/2013
I love it! I want you to continue on, but I can't really give any ideas so, I shouldn't affect you.
| LotR-HP-PJ chapter 13 . 6/29/2013
-IT'S THE ELF ON FIRE! Please forgive Hunger games reference.
-Good job! I loved the story.
-I really don't care what you do, either update soon or post soon!
| Elves are awesome chapter 11 . 5/29/2013
Nothing wrong with liking sports! I only jist started reading your story but it is awesome!
(love your username btw!) :-)
| LotR-HP-PJ chapter 11 . 5/29/2013
You're on Summer Vacation? LUCKY! I still have two weeks left. Did you haaaaaave to make it a cliffe? *sigh* Oh well, thanks for updating though! Sorry I was too lazy to log in.
| LotR-HP-PJ chapter 10 . 5/10/2013
Congrats on your spelling bee award! I hope you update again soon! I can't wait!