|Reviews for My Version|
| thishazeleyeddemon chapter 2 . 11/13/2013
I feel I should mention anachronistic speech and beige prose. You have potential, though. I won't say this is the worst I've ever read. You could do with a little work on it though. May I suggest reading the trilogy and perhaps the Silmarillion, if you haven't?
| thishazeleyeddemon chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
The name for said "sea monster" is the Watcher in the Water. Where is the sea for it to be a monster of? Also, Gimli, too busy boasting to notice the corpses of his friends and kinsfolk, and the smell of their dead bodies.
| LotR-HP-PJ chapter 14 . 11/13/2013
-YES AN UPDATE! YAYAYAYAYAY! It has been SO long! It's nice to see you again!
-Yeah endings are hard.
-I did enjoy it!
-I can't wait to read your next story!
| Storytime-Nightwish chapter 13 . 6/29/2013
I love it! I want you to continue on, but I can't really give any ideas so, I shouldn't affect you.
| LotR-HP-PJ chapter 13 . 6/29/2013
-IT'S THE ELF ON FIRE! Please forgive Hunger games reference.
-Good job! I loved the story.
-I really don't care what you do, either update soon or post soon!
| Elves are awesome chapter 11 . 5/29/2013
Nothing wrong with liking sports! I only jist started reading your story but it is awesome!
(love your username btw!) :-)
| LotR-HP-PJ chapter 11 . 5/29/2013
You're on Summer Vacation? LUCKY! I still have two weeks left. Did you haaaaaave to make it a cliffe? *sigh* Oh well, thanks for updating though! Sorry I was too lazy to log in.
| LotR-HP-PJ chapter 10 . 5/10/2013
Congrats on your spelling bee award! I hope you update again soon! I can't wait!
| LotR-HP-PJ chapter 4 . 5/10/2013
ooooooh, good job! Just please, please, PLEEEEEEEASE Don't kill off our dear Legolas. We all torture him though, even if only in our minds. :) We all have evil minds. I like it though! Our imaginations surprise us all from time to time. Great job!
| StarSlingerSnitch chapter 10 . 2/24/2013
You finally updated! Yay! I was so happy when I found out. But stop delaying it, it's killing me! Just kidding, I love it and keep writing!
| Sajna18 chapter 9 . 2/15/2013
I was very happy to see an update! Great chapter! I hope that things are going well with your friend and basketball! Update soon if you can!
| Nearing Midnight chapter 9 . 2/15/2013
LOL. A friend of mine is a cheerleader for a Cougar team! ;)
Please update soon. - Excellent chapter!
| Merlin Greenleaf Varis chapter 8 . 2/11/2013
What happens next? Write longer chapters. By the way I read your other Legolas-Torture ficts. It was interesting. But you really need to write longer chapters
| StarSlingerSnitch chapter 8 . 2/4/2013
I hadn't checked this story out in a while and I was so happy to discover that you've posted like three more chapters! And don't worry-I understand your love for Legolas angst.
| Sajna18 chapter 8 . 2/3/2013
This was a great chapter! So happy to read more of this story! Keep up the good work!