Reviews for Behind The Veil
xXViraXx chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
Plz continue!
XD
I can practically see Dante stealing Nero and then run away to do more hot lovin! I love it!
Mikey chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
Wow that was awesome I wish my girlfriend was this creative with sex
ZenyZootSuit chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
AWWW! That was so sweet! Great job :)
SirenaLoreley chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
So hot and tender at the same time... I loved it! Nero being a sexy slave is always an image that seduces me...
Will Dante take Nero with him? oh, hope you'll continue this story...!
Take care and good luck!
Justwithportals chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
Yes. Can I put it in intalic for empahsis? Like, after that crazy idea storm... I'm pretty much so in love with your writings and now this just really POLI YOU MAKE ME FEELS. So, yes I pretty much approve this.
I always loved arabic theme and sex with fruits and your writings so since you combined everything it's just perfection. I really loved how creative Dante was ahahahh and Nero too (the strawberry scene jesus christ I so lost it) and in fact you used everything perfectly.
THO I really want Dante to take Nero home and... give him more fruits. I feel like writing a fanfiction for your fanfiction. Is that really bad? /tacklehugs you and kisses your forehead