|Reviews for Mass Dead Effect|
| amerdism chapter 12 . 4/8
Awesome story, when's the next chapter going up, I hope to see more soon.
| icedshadows chapter 5 . 3/26
| icedshadows chapter 4 . 3/26
...Firstly...its... how could i say?... it...GREAT! ICESOME INCREDIBUBLE! JUST GENIUS!
Thank you to have shared this incredible story of your with us!
| Little Liar chapter 12 . 7/20/2016
| JimmyHall24 chapter 5 . 4/30/2016
I think femshep with Alex Mercer abilities would be awesome in a fic.
| strange chapter 1 . 4/8/2016
i always thought bill as a smoke, eh *shrugs* bet he's really happy to have the bulging muscles of a steroid user
| Monki-Neko chapter 1 . 1/24/2016
I don't know if English is your second language or if this is your first story, or if it's both, but the sentence structure of your sentences are switched around, especially when it comes to the adjectives coming before the nouns.
| TheRyuuMaster chapter 12 . 4/21/2015
I miss this story, please update soon
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/17/2014
it is good
| Goodpie2 chapter 2 . 7/25/2014
YOU DON'T USE AN APOSTROPHE TO PLURALIZE A WORD. EVER. UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES. Other than that, great story.
| tylermech66 chapter 7 . 7/3/2014
give shepard Tank abilities!
Mother should be right as rain!
| tylermech66 chapter 5 . 7/3/2014
Tank-Witch! Slightly buff looking witch that is much stronger than she looks! "Drool"
| tylermech66 chapter 4 . 7/3/2014
hmm, you should do more of dem grammer checks.
| snarkyfish chapter 10 . 6/5/2014
I wonder if there are any Boomer/Hunter, uh, what were they called again? Strains? Splices?
| blaiseingfire chapter 12 . 3/10/2014
WE WANT MORE!