Reviews for Mirai no Kusari
poems2songs chapter 10 . 10/10/2007
interesting story... really like it so far... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
bubblygoo chapter 10 . 7/13/2006
*Sigh* I have a big brother, and he sure isn't protective of me...

Good luck with your story, and I look forward to your next update.
bubblygoo chapter 4 . 7/13/2006
Amazing story. Boviously, your research and symbology add more depth and make your story more addicting.

"Karen (Kaoru) being deprived of air for more than five minutes is partially possible. In reality, she could've suffered brain damage from lack of oxygen to the brain. BUT, since Kaoru survived Jin-E's Shin no Ippo for nearly five minutes, then so can Karen. Crazy RK logic. *shrugs* So sue me."

If it makes you feel better, in the Viz dub of the manga, she lasted for two minutes.
Misty chapter 2 . 1/13/2006
I just finished chapter 2 and i just wanted to say i liked the meanings behind the names! you really seemed to know what you are doing! very creative...
BubblyBoo chapter 10 . 6/30/2004
I like this story a lot. And thanks for giving the Kenshin-gumi normal lives for once, instead of having them being constantly chased by insane mobsters or something along those lines. The one thing that threw me off was the changing of the names. It took me a bit of getting used to (what with trying to remember who was who) but I got used to it and your explanations all made perfect sense.

Please update soon!
Firuze Khanume chapter 10 . 12/24/2003
Hi! *glomps author*
First of all, I'm honored that you had included Asiyah in your fic, and I like the approach you have about her and Ennis. I'm so SORRY that I missed your update, but I'm solving this right now. Hehehe The brothers 'protectiveness' sounded ver good, and the subsequent reaction from Karen is in tune with her 'past life' self. Is this Saitou (wild guess), standing by Hiko's side? and the old man, is Okina?
I also like Zeke very much, with his supernatural 'impressions'.
*snikers* Sano's fear is priceless, but, indeed I'd be scared also after such frigtening experience as getting lost at such tender age and in such busy place...
Ash... smiling? ORO! That's a SIGHT... Now... poor Ken still has to undergo Ash 'approval' test... Ouch, ouch, ouchie...
And, of course there is already 'chemistry' between K/K...
Thanks for answering my questions with this chapter... now I want to know who is the man with Hiko, and the old man that heard their chat... don't know but I have THIS feeling... I mean, I bet there will be trouble (action) soon... these has been spared for several chapters... hehehe...
waiting for the next update
ixchen chapter 7 . 12/14/2003
loved this story
aki6 chapter 10 . 11/25/2003
Hi, love your story. the 'baby sister' and 'baby brother' thing really cracks me up! The connection between all the characters is confusing at times but very engaging. The revelation that Zeke has some hidden 'talents' is intriguing and I hope to read more about it in the next chapter. Eh...I'm the last person to hurry you but hey, take as long as you want so long as you continue your writing! It's wonderful!
MP chapter 10 . 10/23/2003
you finally updated! what took you so long... but it was worth the wait. i love every bit of it, especially the baby sister/baby brother part from sam and kevin! _x they are all so cute... btw, can't wait to see ken and ash fight! ;-)
Annie chapter 10 . 10/20/2003
Finally you updated! I was giving up hope. Anyway pls update soon.
marstanuki chapter 10 . 10/20/2003
oi! what took you so long? i've been waiting for this fic for ages! glad i surfed the internet today. post the next chapter soon!
Vesca chapter 10 . 10/19/2003
OMG! I can't believe you actually updated! YAYAYAYAYA. It's a nice chapter with lots of good and happy interaction. I cna't wait for Ash to actually show up in the city. Next up is New Year's right? YAY! oh.. and who was Hiko talking to I wonder... Hmm.. these and other mysteries soon to be solved.
Kenshinfanatic1 chapter 8 . 9/18/2003
love it! write more now!PELLAESE!
czarek chapter 8 . 7/6/2003
I wasn't able to read this fic for a long time. It's good and the touch of your own style in writing really brings out the best of it. But, I've got to admit, I sometimes get confused on who's Toni, who's Karen, who's Soren... that sort of thing. But like I said, you've got your own unique style in writing and it's really good. Ja.
Emiri-chan the GREAT chapter 8 . 4/21/2003
Heya! I just used your "hentai" idea, and boy did I have fun with it! Go check it out if ya want...
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