|Reviews for Man of the World|
| Myron22 chapter 5 . 1/2
"...centuries of experience to draw on."
My dear Lucy, that is NOT something your supposed to say to a guy who is emotionally attached to you.
| Myron22 chapter 2 . 1/2
I still would like to have known just what was going through Lucy's head when she noticed that Juno was trying to get Desmond to kill her, and whether or not She or anyone else was able to see and/or think while they were in "stasis mode".
| Myron22 chapter 31 . 12/13/2013
Well, I always figured that you left Connor untouched because you decided to leave the flashback story untouched and were only concerned with rewriting (not to mention redeeming) Desmond's story.
| Myron22 chapter 30 . 12/13/2013
I take it, you changed the "original/real" reason for Juno wanting Lucy dead?
| Myron22 chapter 29 . 12/13/2013
Considering that you made Kyle up, it isn't surprising that he was a "redshirt".
Don't get me wrong, I am enjoying your story, it's a pity there is no way to declare this to be the official "canon" story.
| Kira Kyuu chapter 36 . 11/11/2013
Yay! A happy ending! Well, for the most part, but still! Happy ending! -dances-
| Kira Kyuu chapter 30 . 11/11/2013
And, okay, I forgive you for killing Kyle. I understood why, but it still made me sad :c Still, letting Desmond beat the shit out of Vidic and kill Cross was a nice result of that.
| Kira Kyuu chapter 29 . 11/11/2013
That was your plan from the beginning, wasn't it? To make a damn South Park reference? :c That was cruel, man. I -liked- him, unlike most OCs I encounter.
| nathan.perkins1981 chapter 31 . 9/25/2013
Holy monkeys! This is one of the best stories I have ever had the pleasure of writing. The characters feel real, the writing is intense, and the emotions are palpable. Freaking fantastic!
Can I also have the unedited chapter 5 and the
Connor story too? After reading this story, I have to have more.
| Guest chapter 36 . 6/14/2013
riposa in pace Kyle
| valkyrieXhawk chapter 28 . 6/6/2013
I'm re reading it all over again :)
| LeisaTheGreat chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
I would just like to say that this is the single, greatest fanfiction I have EVER read. Amazing job! :D
| Arrow783 chapter 36 . 5/18/2013
Seriously, this is so much better than what i have in game, i really enjoyed this story
| Liisiko chapter 36 . 3/11/2013
Great story. It's taken a while to find time to review, but I enjoyed it quite a lot. I love how you keep everyone in character, and the changes you do make feel like very natural directions for them to develop in. The same with the plot. I like how you've altered events fall out better without making it feel too easy for everyone. The happy ending of this story is definitely well earned and very sweet.
Looking forward to reading the rest of the series when I can. You did a good job tying up lose ends for this story while still leaving open room for more.
| Vanilla.Twilight2323 chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
! Your writing is excellent! I knew exactly where I was at the beginning of the chapter (in the game) as you describe it so well and then the twist comes along just nicely.
I'll defiantly be reading this later! Well done.