Reviews for Halo: The Human Elite
Darth Vader likes 2 69 chapter 1 . 11/29/2017
Great story
Guest chapter 19 . 10/25/2017
Siphol Vadamee chapter 19 . 10/18/2017
Please include Palmer as one of your kidn- I mean colegues in the series. Keep up the good work

P.S. Also I'm the elite who wrote that love poem in halo 5 to Palmer (Don't tell BB, he'll never shut up)
Guest chapter 19 . 9/4/2017
Keep writeing it plzzzzz this is such a great story:)
Guest chapter 6 . 9/2/2017
Oooooh this is so good so far:) !
Underaged Pretzel chapter 19 . 2/23/2017
This is a good fanfiction. Im new to writing fanfictions, so dont take this as an insult: Why are there so many chapters? I respect your commitment tho.
Psycho wolf chapter 19 . 1/20/2017
Hey it took 3 days to read but I loved it I know how it feels to do something and get support but school stop's you from making more I have a YouTube channel and by the time I'm home I'm wreck and can't make a video but I want to so please keep this series going
Anna chapter 19 . 8/5/2016
Hey I think it reached hundred reviews. And not to be rude or anything I hope your not dead ok? Just saying.
emipopescu21 chapter 1 . 8/4/2016
Hello where is chapter 20?
Shnaz Poppers chapter 19 . 3/30/2016
I just finished reading this story at 1 o clock in the morning and it was brilliant but I can't help but notice that you speak of up coming chapters yet there are non after this and I apologise if you are currently making another one but if you are not then PLEASE make more this is the best fanfic I have ever read! And I feel like the story just isn't ready to end, I see so much potential for more chapters. It makes me so sad to see astoundingly brilliant fanfics like this to be left without an ending especially a fanfic that is so unique! It gave me a whole new view of the covenant that fascinated me! I loved the dialogues between the charecters at the end of each chapter they were so imaginative that sometimes I was excited to read them at the end of the chapter!...I made a fan fiction account just to make this review so this is my first one so I do not know if you will see it but if you do please continue and if you don't PLEASE give me a reason as to why not

To my favourite fanfic author Bigareader16
Yours sincerely Shnaz Poppers
bronson chapter 19 . 2/17/2016
Autumnalcheese chapter 19 . 1/25/2016
This was a really fun read! I like the idea of a human raised by an elite; though I am still wondering why the kid has the side and strength of an elite as well... I liked seeing what you tried out with the different characters, and their interactions with each other (including the beginnings and endings :) ) The fight scenes were exciting enough without needing overmuch blood and gore, which I thought was good.
There were a few spelling errors (no faulting, especially seeing I do them all teh time, lol), and some of the phraseology was difficult ot follow. (For example: 'She had been [expecting] an [average]-sized boy...' From last chapter, towards the beginning, and '...Regret did something to strike him through the [abdomen?] [WITH the demon?]...' Also from last chapter when the elites are boozing it up and talking about elite stuff. There are couple more instances of similar things)

I apologize if this comes across as offensive. Honestly, I really enjoyed reading this story, and I can't wait to see more. Cliffhangers aside, it's got the Rbiter AND the Chief! That's awesome.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/11/2016
Love the whole story! I was wondering if you could do a story on hyaks childhood with thel vadam! That would be funny right cortana? *Cortana looks over* I guess so... As long as I am in there!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/8/2016
I really liked the story! It was very well detailed! And the you for not making the main person a girl! That would have ruined everything! Anyway really enjoyed the fanfic! Please write some more! P.S. I really hate cliff hangers!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/6/2016
I love this fanfic! It's pretty funny at the beginning and end! Also I have been looking for a story like this but couldn't find it. Please keep making
Fanfictions! Also did I mention I'm female? ;)
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