Reviews for Better Than Life |
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paulieandgilbert chapter 1 . 2/7 This story is wonderful, however it feels like the reveal at the end is rather unpolished. There's no emphasis on her realization of the truth and no explanation of just how the charm took her to him in the first place when Severus clearly escorted her home. Also, why did he take the charm box? This feels like it should have had further chapters. Perhaps it would have made a good multi-chap fic. Oh well, you can't have everything. Thanks! |
RhodaBush chapter 1 . 9/10/2023 Oh please do a sequel |
thisaccountisnolongerviable chapter 1 . 8/24/2022 ugh I want more, this is great |
Ice Demon Ranger chapter 1 . 5/11/2022 Such a funny little story. Wonderful. It could be the beginning of a multi-chapter story, but is wonderful as a stand allone. Thanks for sharing. |
RhiannonULlewely chapter 1 . 12/13/2020 Love this! |
Hgelman chapter 1 . 12/13/2020 Just so lovely! |
TheWelcomeStranger chapter 1 . 12/13/2020 I could have read a lot more of this! Love it |
PanduhBabyy chapter 1 . 11/23/2020 Awe! this was adorable! |
guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2020 Priceless! Fantasy within fantasy. The characterizations are excellent (aside from the teensy quibble that Snape would also have mastered wandless magic). I usually avoid SSHG because I've been a teacher and can't face the idea of Snape's so horrendously abusing his power over students (of age or not, willing or not; sexual abuse is so much worse than the sort he did commit). Relatively few authors feature a post-Hogwarts HG. This was a gem. |
heymaycosta chapter 1 . 6/16/2020 Amazing little piece. Loved it! |
PensievePrince chapter 1 . 6/7/2020 adorable! |
Recreational Potions chapter 1 . 10/25/2019 My goodness that was glorious. One of the most entertaining one shots I've ever read. The beginning was surprisingly angsty, but in a way that was really well done and set the stage for the rest. There are so many great moments in this, like when she complains about what she is wearing, or the angst she poors into wandless magic. I know the feeling of having things be so fucked it seems like you should be able to take someone out by force of your own frustration. And her constantly saying whatever she is thinking, no matter how dirty - so much fun. I loved it - thank you! |
ardsmair chapter 1 . 9/26/2019 oh that was wonderful! |
Acantha Rayne Oak-Moon chapter 1 . 9/17/2019 This was adorable. I loved it. And I want that kind of daydream... where I get the man of my dreams back from the dead and on my doorstep the next morning. Specifically that man lol |
mysinger chapter 1 . 8/26/2019 Delightful! I loved the ending. |