Reviews for Two are better than one
AspergianStoryteller chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
A delicious idea, but you should break it into smaller paragraphs. Such a big block of sentences is hard to follow.
SoraTadano chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
H.S.C. lolololol: I have to thank you for all your nice reviews. Honestly I didn't expect that my stories would get any good critics. I'm glad that you like my writing so much.
H.S.C. lolololol chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
I decided against my guest username. If you know me as one, you shant know me as another. Poor Keigo. Doesn't know who's name to moan, lol. If they were 4, or 5 year olds, I could totally see a chibi Jirou walk up to a chibi Fuji and be all like, "Join our gang" lololol.