Reviews for Roadkill
Twinchy chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
Heartbreaking but very well done!
lb chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
I really like your writing style. Great insight into Javi's head. I was thinking that too after the Christmas episode when everyone else had somewhere to be. Maybe Javi and Lanie will grow closer once they both realize everyone around them is growing up and settling down.
Hell-and-bliss chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
awww I love it! Espo is my fav...that was super cute! thanks for writting this!
Vondrakenhof chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
Yeah, Esposito seems to be very down this season. I'm starting to feel sorry for him. Still, he makes a difference everyday and he's got a great circle of friends.

You wrote this really well, capturing emotion perfectly.

Keep up the good work!
GuppyintheOcean chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
Hey, I LOVE The Notebook! Seriously, this is a great little story and I love it too.
scripting life chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
Oh this is good. These are exactly the kind of thoughts I imagine have been running through Espo's head this season. I really like the tone you use. It's not overtly angst-ridden, but the matter-of-fact tone sprinkled with bits of humor highlights the melancholy far better than if you'd gone the dramatic route. Book-ending this with "Esposito had a new couch" was a smart touch too. Concise, subtle, and insightful. Everything I want to see in a drabble. Great job!