|Reviews for The Dark Child|
| Mysterious Pureblood chapter 8 . 8/5
| zamik chapter 7 . 7/16
It's nice story, thanks.
But if you are re-reading it sometimes, please, just chcek it- you sometimes forgot what have you written. Like trace on Harry's wand- there are two different reasones why it's gone.
| paz chapter 7 . 7/3
| Valenkisa chapter 3 . 5/20
I love that even though he isn't close them in this fic, harry still funds the twins.
| Dratias chapter 7 . 5/10
Awesome story. I really enjoyed reading it. Kinda wish it didn't have all the grammatical mistakes, but oh well. Loved those scenes with Harry and Marvolo xP Very well-written.
| katrinahiman chapter 8 . 4/24
| nayumyst chapter 3 . 4/21
Need to chill on the commas.
| LivingALittle chapter 3 . 2/10
You are missing a line in the Mer-people's song. You forgot the sixth line. There are eight lines total. The sixth line is "To recover what we took." Either way, great story so far.
| Guest chapter 8 . 12/7/2015
i like the content of the story but the grammar and spelling are very flawed
| mersykun chapter 8 . 11/23/2015
| Elizabeth Boyd chapter 8 . 10/18/2015
OH PLEASE TELL ME WHEN THE SEQUEL WILL BE POSTED
| CrypticSilhouette chapter 2 . 10/4/2015
TONE DOWN THE COMMAS
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2015
I just want to say that the part where they are in the boats and get to see hogwarts is a little mixed up, the paragraphs are a little confusing.
| Inu-Neko2 chapter 7 . 8/17/2015
| lightwalnut64 chapter 8 . 7/17/2015
Totally loved this! Im starting to adore Dark!Harry haha thank you for this 3