|Reviews for Lightness|
| silverflight8 chapter 1 . 1/29
Oh my god thank god for that ending! Hopefully they can go on from there. Very haunting, although for the first bit I couldn't figure out why it was so detached from concrete ideas/associations that most fic has. It worked beautifully. And I am going to pretend that what happens next is tooth-rotting fluff to contend with what Hermione? Draco? has been through.
| TheTofurkey chapter 1 . 1/10
This was such a mindfuck and I loved it! You got me twice!
| BlueberriesGoneBad chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
This is really interesting, but I don't understand what happened. Explain to me the plot?
| kelly chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
wow. this was really...deep, and interesting, and intimate...i'm trying to find the right word to describe it but i can't. i really, really enjoyed reading this. i liked the idea of this afterlife. i'm really not sure how to adequately express how i'm feeling after reading it, and i know this is not a good review, but just know that this was really, really good.
| BookSweetHeart chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
I'm a little confused.
| thunder2010 chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
Woah. That was intense. I only half understand the plot but omg this was amazing! I love all of your stories, you are such an amazing writer!
| Jane Doe chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
You have a wonderful way with words, ( which is not one of my strong sides ) so can't say much more but that what you have written is beautiful.
| ahu89 chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
Brilliant. Like what my mother always say, you never want to experience yourself in such a hopeless and dire scenarios in love but they make the best stories.
Love the writing. Love love love.
| acro acro chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
That was abstract, but it was very good. Probably going to have to read that one again to understand it fully!
| guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
I'm lost and confuse.
| Panda Lillies chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
Wow, This was beautiful. It was beautiful in the way you wrote it and made the reader think and piece together their own conclusions. I'm not sure if that was your technique or not, but while I was reading it, I was continuously tempted with the idea that I had to piece together my own conclusions of what happened and what would happen. I feel like at the end of your story, you left the ending open so that the reader may produce their own idea of what happens in the ever after portion of their love story. See, that's what's so great about this story. There is so many possibilities of what happened and what could happen after Hermoine wakes up or if it is her waking up. There are some many different theories you came make from the beginning all the way to the end of the story. It was simply beautiful.
| skari chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
| Elsass-Lothringen chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Very good :)
| raspberryjukebox chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
You are amazing. This was amazing. How had I not discovered you on here before? For shame, raspberry. For shame.
| arururur chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
well that made me think. i liked it, it was really different then most dramione stories i've read recently. nice twist at the end btw