Reviews for Letters to You
Mouse and Stupid Productions chapter 5 . 9/4/2013
This story is adorable
Mouse and Stupid Productions chapter 3 . 9/4/2013
D'aww . But I thought Hannah Abbott was the barmaid at the Leaky...
To-Claim-The-Sky chapter 10 . 9/4/2013
This was great as well! I loved all of Hermione's questions, and it's so sweet of Neville to help the other students out!

I think possibly the previous chapter was kinda unnecessary because this letter includes everything that happened in the last chapter, but it doesn't really matter now. I'm glad we can see Hermione's response to Harry.

I'd like to see some more Romione letters next, to see how Ron reacts to letters from Viktor and Draco - Ron's very protective and gets jealous easy, so his reaction should be interesting.

Anyway, great story so far - there aren't many good Romione fics out there. Can't wait to see what happens next :)
To-Claim-The-Sky chapter 9 . 9/4/2013
Ok, well I like the idea of Draco returning her wand. And of course he'd still call her Granger. This was pretty short, but I guess that is the point, so I'm not complaining :)
To-Claim-The-Sky chapter 8 . 9/4/2013
I really liked Harry's POV and the references to Teddy. The fountain is great! Sorry, these reviews are getting shorter but I have to go out soon so I'm trying to go quick!
To-Claim-The-Sky chapter 7 . 9/4/2013
I loved this, you got Viktor's voice really well! Can't wait to see Ron's reaction to Viktor writing to Hermione. That is, if she tells him...
To-Claim-The-Sky chapter 6 . 9/4/2013
I love the idea of friendly Quidditch matches! But I'm confused, is Ryan a Hufflepuff or a Ravenclaw?
To-Claim-The-Sky chapter 5 . 9/4/2013
This was great. I'm glad George is recovering a bit, and I liked the details about the other Weasley brothers. Forgot to say last time that I love the idea of everyone having to sit with people they don't know for the promotion of house unity. I wonder if Hermione will make some new Slytherin friends? The French is really sweet, looking forward to next letters...
To-Claim-The-Sky chapter 4 . 9/4/2013
Awwww, the ending of this letter was so sweet. Again, great job on keeping Hermione very in character. I love how she knows every detail about the new edition of Hogwarts: A History and I can imagine she'd be very happy to be so close to the library!
To-Claim-The-Sky chapter 3 . 9/4/2013
This chapter was great! You're keeping Ron really in character, especially his scepticism and mistrust of the Slytherins. I liked the references to other characters in this chapter, especially Harry's plans to redo Grimmauld Place and Luna's dirigible plums!

I think most of the spellingy things I've seen are just little typos, eg in this one it should be "It's weird to think of her as Headmistress..." rather than "It weird". But I wouldn't worry too much, as it's generally well-written, and the most important thing is really to get the voice right, which you're doing really well at the moment.

On to the next letter...
To-Claim-The-Sky chapter 2 . 9/4/2013
Again, you've got Hermione's voice spot on. I'm glad she's being so supportive of Ron. I like the idea of Malfoy having to return because of his probation. Hopefully in the next few letters we'll hear more about Hermione's interactions with the other students.

"I'm taking care of Ginny (and she's taking care of me)" - I loved this line, it was a nice touch.
To-Claim-The-Sky chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
I'm a bit canon-obsessive so I love this story so far! I noticed a couple of tiny spelling/grammar mistakes but I'm not sure if they were deliberate or not. But generally I thought you did a great job at capturing Ron's voice and I'm looking forward to reading more...
regbride12 chapter 9 . 8/6/2013
Uhm interesting enough to say the least :) so her original wand was located?
That will be interesting to see her reaction! Update more soon!
regbride12 chapter 8 . 8/6/2013
Sometimes it's fun to see Harry's POV :) this was sweet...but now back to R/Hr ;)
wandaa chapter 9 . 8/5/2013
Short, audacious and realistic. Loved it
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