Reviews for When Two Maelstroms Collide |
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Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2023 Story's interesting but you obviously did something wrong because it's a dead end story it goes nowhere. |
Crystal Grenadier chapter 1 . 5/22/2016 Damn it this would have been an amazing freakin fic if you continued it past this one chapter. That was awesome. |
Primus2021 chapter 1 . 4/22/2016 Naruto x Narume x Hinata please |
D chapter 1 . 3/2/2016 what? 1 chapter written 3 years ago.. these are supposed to be stories not teasers. hell you didn't even finish 1 scene let alone a story. well anyway outside of the fact that you wasted the possibility of this story being a fantastic one its damn good for a beginning. |
Roland Tepes chapter 1 . 2/22/2015 This was a great chapter. please keep up the great work. |
SaucyHandles chapter 1 . 11/11/2014 HOW THE FUCK ARE YOU GONNA WRITE SOMETHING AS AWESOME AS THIS AND NOT UPDATE!? |
jabbarulez chapter 1 . 7/26/2014 bwahahahaha! and the fun begins! |
AJGuardian chapter 1 . 4/20/2014 This has promise. A shame you haven't continued after so long. |
saashi samy chapter 1 . 4/2/2014 interesting idea i like |
The Third Biker Scholar chapter 1 . 3/13/2014 awesome! I can't wait to read more! |
K. M. Donovan chapter 1 . 2/1/2014 THIS NEEDS TO CONTINUE. seriously you have a good start to a potentially awesome fic, don't stop now, your audience demands more. |
Kilroy7087 chapter 1 . 10/6/2013 Dude please update soon this is a great concept and I'd love to see more |
Amidamaru88 chapter 1 . 9/13/2013 so chapter 2 ... |
SkyRage chapter 1 . 9/2/2013 No harem please! |
Lucifer666Morningstar chapter 1 . 7/16/2013 please continue it seams to be an okay story |