Reviews for Eviction Notice from Mrs Hudson
Wumbo-Girl 1314 chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
Hmm, Mrs Hudson's decision to evict John purely for his and Sarah's safety and happiness is a very interesting storyline. It shows how selfless Mrs Hudson is when it comes to her boys! :)

Though I have spotted one error. When John tells her to have tea and that he will find her some sleeping pills, you missed the 's' in 'Mrs'.

Other than that, this is a lovely story you have written here, so keep up the excellent work!

silvermouse :D
Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
Astronomy, not Astrology - significant difference