Reviews for Rain
liketolaugh chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
I liked this, it was very well written. However, i think that it would do better as a scene in a story than as a oneshot in and of itself - while, I stress, it was very well written, it wasn't exactly engaging.
KurohNeko69 chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
I love this despite it being a quick short story, very goo, I honestly have no words to explain how much I loved it especially the sound effects, I could never pull that off. XD