|Reviews for Will the real princess stand up?|
| IHaveNoIdea8 chapter 2 . 2/2/2013
I have to admit, I laughed at the reference to Natalia's terrible cooking. So far I enjoy the random outbursts of Luzu as well. Marsh seems to be the person that kind of keeps things sane here.
Anyway, all I really noticed in this were a few grammar mistakes, as well as occasionally jumping from past to present tense, which can get confusing if it happens too often.
Other than that, I thought this was good. :)
| IHaveNoIdea8 chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
I have to say, this is definitely an interesting idea. You've also improved a lot with your descriptions and such. I'd like to see more of this.