you know i gotta thank you for this story, i didn't even realized the symbolism behind his reflection in the window before reading this. I tend not to catch that kinda stuff when im reading or watching something

looove it ! i hope u will be making more kirisuna fic _

That was pretty good. You've actually made the 'ending' of Sword Art Online far batter than it did in the anime. Yeah, I think the ending of the anime's kinda rushed, but I think it's because that the story isn't finished yet. Kirito's journey is still far from over. Had the story of SAO ended at the end of Alfheim arc, then this story is a suitable ending for it, but the ending of the anime showed possibilities about more adventures for the characters...Anyways, great job!