|Reviews for Albus Potter and the Cunning Plan|
| LeBonnel chapter 5 . 8/15/2013
First off all I'd like to compliment you on your absolutely amazing writing skills. The plot seema to be very well thought and the characters are really deeply explored. And in spite off thinking that Scorpius is being a little too much spoiled for my personnal liking, I still think iys a rather positive change of personallity, as I aldo hope he'll grown up mature with the development of your story. Again, I congratulate you, as you have one of the best writting skills i've read so far.
| tox68 chapter 5 . 5/28/2013
This has so much potential and I really really enjoy reading it.
My only hope for the coming chapters is that you will re-distribute the "bad characters" a bit (I only see the bully-ones in Gryffindor so far and it's somehow unfair, even from Slytherin POV).
I also wish James will be good again to Albus. I really hate it when there's conflicts between the siblings. In my fantasy, James can be mean sometimes but all older brothers should protect their little brothers all the way in the end ; )
Oh, and you really mean "Year Two" and not "second term"? I was hope each book could be longer since it's entertaining
| Khashana chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
Mm, nice job so far. I like how many surnames I recognize, especially the less obvious ones.
| mikako17 chapter 4 . 5/11/2013
I like your characterizations of Albus and Scorpius in this. I can definitely see your Albus as a Slytherin and someone raised in the Potter/Weasely family. It's the same for Scorpius. And their interactions with each other is done well, the hint of Scorpius liking Albus more than as friends, Albus liking Scorpius as a friend even though he is aware of Scorpius's more unlikable traits.
| Pri-ThePuppeteer chapter 5 . 5/5/2013
This is AWESOME!
I can't wait to the moment when Albus meet his family again and their expression ( Draco's) when they find out who is Albus' best friend XD that's going to be epic!
| XxRazorgirlxX chapter 5 . 5/5/2013
| DemeRain chapter 5 . 5/4/2013
This story is a lot of fun so far. I love next-gen stories. Thanks for sharing.
| el33ri chapter 5 . 5/3/2013
I'm loving this story!
Just a quick note re: black cats and superstition, I believe a black cat crossing your path is considered to be good luck rather than bad luck in Britain (or at least Scotland). Not that this is anything more than a minor detail.
I am really enjoying your characterizations of the next generation characters :):)
| morbid17 chapter 2 . 4/30/2013
this fanfiction is really good.. but i kind of don't want albus to end up with scopious not really into it :/ but the story is well written. I'm torn between keep on reading or giving up.
| TigerInTheMoonlight chapter 4 . 4/17/2013
NOO somewhere during it I forgot I only had one chapter to read :( I can't wait for the next!
| Princess Mariana chapter 4 . 4/16/2013
This is great! I can't wait to read more! :)
| Lily's Sidekick chapter 4 . 4/16/2013
You write well and the story's entertaining. I like the characters too. From what I remember, first years are allowed to play on the team (just not own a broom), but they are rarely picked -because older students are usually better players. Anyway, I hope Scorpius and Draco don't go too far with this. ...It's interesting to see things from the Slytherin perspective. Though I do think people can't be put into four categories and a lot of the house characteristics are stereotypes and it varies, depending on the individual, what makes them a member of their house. I hope that Al's going to see that sooner or later, and not feel like he has to be and behave a certain way, just because of his house and what others think. I like that while Knight is a git, he's not two-dimensional. I'd like to see more of Rose and her Ravenclaw friends. They seem pretty cool.
Well, good story. I like it.
| jdsnape chapter 3 . 4/12/2013
:) great so far!
| Mary Potter chapter 3 . 2/24/2013
d'Eath is Snape! I pretty certain... Right?
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/15/2013
Seems as if the existence of Hallows isn't that big a secret anymore. Well, now I'm interested in how you use them in your story. Aside from that, the interactions of your characters were well done. Can't wait for more!