|Reviews for In The Dark|
| maura uk chapter 160 . 2/9
thank you for such a wonderful story, you captured grissom and sara characters so well when reading i could hear there voices so you see you write so well its difficult to create visual pictures for the reader, but dont worry you do that so well, please keep writing abour sara and grissom they are such a great couple,
| MAURA UK chapter 156 . 2/8
THIS IS NOT A TIRESOME STORY ITS A GREAT TENSE VISUAL GRAPHIC STORY . I JUST LOVE IT,ONLY I WISH SARA AND GRISSOM COULD HAVE A LITTLE MORE LOVE TIME,,,,
| MAURA UK chapter 155 . 2/8
YES IT WAS WORTH WAITING FOR ,,,,,, TENSE OH SO TENSE I JUST LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE, MORE PLEASE,,
| maura uk chapter 153 . 2/8
wow how can you write such a beautiful scene as the last one,,, so visual moving . I WISH THIS SCENE WAS PART OF THE MOVIE I THINK THIS STORY SHOULD BE JUST GREAT
| maura uk chapter 151 . 2/8
no this chapter was not to long, it was perfect, visual and graphic just moving and our lovely grissom has been able to off load great
| MAURA UK chapter 146 . 2/8
YOUR STORIES ARE NEVER TO LONG THEY ARE SO WELL WRITTEN, GRIPPING AND VERY VISUAL ESPECIALLY GSR GRISSOM AND SARA, BUT I DONT LIKE GRISSOM TO BE HURT,
| MAURA UK chapter 143 . 2/8
BRILLIANT CHAPTER YOU CAPTURE GRISSON SO WELL ITS BEEN LIKE WATCHING A MOVIE READING THIS STORY, THANK PLEASE KEEP WRITING ,
| maura uk chapter 142 . 2/8
i dont know why there were any negative comments about the last chapter, it was clear great visual and graphic well written as are all your stories, and this chapter JUST BEAUTIFUL. NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE AND LET SARA BE PREGNANT,,,,
| Guest chapter 162 . 8/30/2016
I have just reread this whole story. Love it still. Here is too hoping you will write a Grissoms adventure or them coming back to solve a hard case. Again well done.
| sillym3 chapter 123 . 5/24/2016
Oh. Jelly, so sad. The pain of losing. I feel for Sara. Her hatred. Everything.
| Guest chapter 162 . 4/16/2016
Great story...the next one you should write is about the adventures in Hanks Place starring Andy and Grissom.
| sillym3 chapter 122 . 4/12/2016
Jelly. I swear in the name of my son and his favorite Lego Superheroes series that I already dropped reviews for chapter 120 & 121 yesterday but they somehow didn't show up. I wrote something fun about smut and about your b'day but they went missing, not even there in my review history.
I'm so sad, Jelly.
This chapter makes me happy though. The fact that they are starting to stand up against Sylvie makes me happy. And Grissom did have the copy of the documents right?
As for Sara stepping back into her abduction case, hmmmm, do you really think it's a good idea?
And about her not remembering things tow days prior? I'm so curious.
| sillym3 chapter 121 . 4/12/2016
I have several questions too, being the ever forgetful I am. About the phone call they talk about with Tamboia and about the date. Clear things up for me, Jelly.
Btw, do people really talk about their sex life with therapist? (Please picture me throwing the question with an unhinged jaw because it shocks me so much here)
And btw, since you mentioned your birthday in last chapter. Happy birthday! A day late or a year early, I still love you my favorite writer.
| sillym3 chapter 120 . 4/12/2016
What picture, Jelly? What Picture!
I really wish the rest 30 or so chapters will be like this too but that won't do me good since my teeth aren't really that strong.
But yeah, Jelly, yeah yeah yeah. Thank you for the sweet fix.
Let's go to Paris, Mr. & Mrs. Grissom.
| sillym3 chapter 119 . 4/12/2016
Yes, it wouldn't be a bad ending. :)
Dare I say, I kind of missing Heather. (Ewwwwwww)
You wrote her brilliantly and I'm not being biased here.
And the sexy time between Sara and Grissom, daaaaaamn. I think I miss reading a good smut too.