|Reviews for The moment to live and die|
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
On your website that had the link to this
You mentioned a scene where hal sleeps with his hand around Matt. What episode is it? It has to be before sanctuary but I came figure it out
| Angela chapter 2 . 5/28/2013
"I try to crab the door handle" - crab the door handle? Please proofread and fix the typos.
| Angela chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
"but I can see trough his eyes" - what does trough mean?
| S.A.N.e-but-inS.A.N.e chapter 3 . 1/28/2013
Amazing as ever! I loved it! Thanks so much! Excited to see more stories from you!
| DriftingCloudz chapter 2 . 1/23/2013
Well, because you haven't watched the second season finale, I can't really suggest what I want to. Though lol I have no clue how that would fit into the story at all... but anyway, I would just settle for some good old fashioned whumpage. There really aren't enough of these kinds of stories, even though the season two finale gives Hal fans PERFECT MATERIAL. Grrr... it's up to you and me, my friend.
| FallingSkiesxxxHalMason chapter 2 . 1/23/2013
This is another great chapter! I can't wait to see what you come up with next! If I come up with any ideas or suggestions I'll PM you with them:-)
| JoyScott13 chapter 2 . 1/23/2013
Cliffhanger! :O I've enjoyed this so far, even if Hal has suffered a lot :P But I can't wait to see where you take it! How far through FS are you now? :)
| geraldine123 chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
Good start looking forward to the next chapter plz update soon :)
| DriftingCloudz chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
I'm looking forward to the next chapter! This story shows great promise.
| FallingSkiesxxxHalMason chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
This is excellent! I can't wait to see what you come up with next! Keep up the good work!
| LovelyMysteryFan chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
I love this! Can't wait for the next chapter!(: And I know you will love the both seasons! ;) 3
| victoria chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
uggh a cliffhanger...am loving it...update asap...:)