|Reviews for Divine Intervention|
| Smithback chapter 18 . 10/10/2013
so exiting! I can not waith to see the result of this resque plan.
| anotherboarduser chapter 18 . 9/25/2013
I think this is a good story so far.
I also think that the "religious witch hunter" people are going into the realm of wrongness. Considering how the oath they forced on Harry, Hermione and Ron.
I mean Harry, Hermione and Ron are the good guys and trying to save both magical and muggles. Yet the oath the witch hunters forced on them are one of slavery.
"Will you, Harry, obey my every order until Tom Marvolo Riddle, the current dark lord, is fully and finally defeated and killed?" is a too over-powerful oath. It's not like an oath where "You shall not go evil beyond this point" or "You shall not join Voldemort". It's like doing anything they want you to do.
Even if the witch-hunter want Harry, Hermione and Ron to die killing Voldemort, the oath would force them to. Even if the witch-hunter ask them to do a ritual to bound Harry, Hermione and Ron to be their assassin forever, they would be forced by the wrongful oath to do so. I think this is wrong.
I also think that there are ways around the oath. I have already thought of many ways to do that. You can message me if you want to heard them.
I also think that Harry, Hermione and other witch and wizards need to get some insurance against the witch hunter. Just as insurances ensure that the witch-hunters will not turn on them later.
While the witch-hunter may or may not do that, given the amount of witch or innocent woman that has been burn under the wooden cross by previous "witch hunters", the precaution may be a good move to make.
| Guest chapter 17 . 9/19/2013
cool dobby's here now things are going to get interesting. One thing I'm curious about thou is when the trio escape the religious nut jobs can Hermione release Ron and harry from the unbreakable early?
I do like how you've portrayed Ron, he's my favorite character of the trio, it makes sense that he would have no trouble with the vow because he trusts Hermione so completely.
I think the trio is going to have serious trouble outta the "burn'em all and let God sort'em out" type preist, he seems like if he doesn't get the answers he wants he will take matters into his own hands.
Anyway it's a very interesting story and I look forward to the next installment.
| anotherboarduser chapter 16 . 9/18/2013
I like this concept of how muggles have enough.
But I think the vow that "Paul" had Harry, Hermione and Ron swear is just too vague and too easy to abuse. So I think that part is not so good.
Overall, I'll like to read and see where this story is headed.
| Goundry chapter 16 . 9/18/2013
I have to admit I don't like hermione/Ron as a ship, and wouldn't have read it if it had been in the summary or characters tab,
But then I would have missed a realy good and original story.
That's not to say I wouldn't be happy if it ended up HHr, but even if I dosn't you've done the impossible and got me reading a R/Hr story
| dante chapter 15 . 9/15/2013
i have to admit that I really really do not like the ship of Hermione-Ron... so, .. just saying...
please, update soon this awesome story
| Guest chapter 15 . 8/11/2013
| Ruby chapter 15 . 7/17/2013
Yes! Can't wait till they get to malfoy manor! keep it up please!
| Smithback chapter 15 . 7/8/2013
| Sonicthehedgewolf chapter 15 . 7/3/2013
Very interesting story. Please update ASAP.
| Gwenlynn chapter 15 . 6/30/2013
Unbreakable vows just like binding magical contracts are evil things that should never be taken.
I would never do one unless I have made a dozen goblin lawyers tweak the words in my favour!
| Adina2938 chapter 15 . 6/30/2013
This is really good!
| Gwenlynn chapter 13 . 6/18/2013
You realize that Hermione just ordered people to die? What will happen when she realizes that she became a murderer herself?
| Smithback chapter 13 . 6/18/2013
intense! uff.. a great chapter and now.. Harry is going to be awake.. what is he going to do?! hum.. he is ... he can be razonable... so. I do not know..
| Guest chapter 13 . 6/16/2013
I must say that I love the fact that your work is not cliche, especially when it comes to romance. I feel too much can even ruin a fanfic, but you are playing it nice and slow :) keep up the great work!