Hi I know the story is discontinued but if by any chance you finished it or decided on an ending pleassseee send it to me. I like Percy being smart and percabeth. I won't even upload it anywhere else i will just read it. This is one of my favourite fanfictions.

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Iris literally lives in Alaska. Going to Alaska doesn't diminish the Gods' powers, and it doesn't disconnect them from Olympus. Its just that the gods usually don't pay attention to Alaska. Its beyond their circle of control.

Why the hell is it everytime Leo, Leo is my second best favourite character after Perseus ofcourse...

Consider me done with reading your stories!

Why is Leo so bad in this fanfic? He is next to useless in the fight against the primordials. If it was the real Leo, he would have built an awesome contraption and plan to take out Stacia, he would just sneak up to her and try to taze her. He'd build a long range taser, or make a drone to use the tazer on her. And now, he sells out Stacia to Kronos to get back Calypso. I feel like he would tell the others. He isn't the kind of guy to do that.

Being immune to others domains seems a little overpowered. I get that being the goddess of crossroads, she is never weakened in other domains, but being immune to the godly attacks? Thats seems like overkill. If they are harmed by weapons, it stands to reason that they can be harmed by lightning, water, shadows, undead skeletons, since they are being used as weapons.

Please don't make Stacia as powerful as Percy. She should be extremely powerful, but Percy should always be the most powerful. Stacia should probably be on the same level as Nico, a little higher than Jason and Thalia, at least, when she is older.

If Nico can travel through shadows, and Percy can travel through water, can Thalia travel through lightning? Even better, can Ananbeth travel through books?

Percy should survive the lava for a few minutes. That should give someone enough time to rescue him.

Percy becoming the Indiana Jones of Geology.

Is there going to be some Athena x Poseidon shipping? Cause if there is, Im all for it!

I didn't think it was possible, but Percy just got even more badass.

TBH, I'm just relieved that you're still alive, Theseus.

Bullshit. Some shit isn’t forgivable. Percy had every right and justification. If Poseidon had faded it would have been his own fault not percys. Artemis and Athena are wrong to blame Percy for Poseidon’s actions. Why is it percys responsibility to fix someone else mistake. You throw someone away, don’t ever expect them to be part of your life again. But the Greek gods are well know for being amazingly stupid. Even Athena.

Ooh... Alabaster is there! Is Dr. Claymore there too?

Oof