|Reviews for VeggieTales Short: Mr Lunt & His Private Jet!|
| IFlewOverTheCuckoo'sNest chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
Mr. Lunt is a sass master, even if he can't really keep his story straight. What a fun little story.
| civilwarrose chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
Love it! I was waiting for a fic starring Mr. Lunt, he's my favorite Veggie because he always has the most hilarious snarky lines. He is so in-character, and of course you had to put cheese curls in there somewhere.:) And your author's note at the end- I was hearing Archie's voice when I read it. Really cute fic!
| Music Person chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
Nice Job! Enough said.
| Comment person chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
Only Mr. Lunt could tell a story like that. There's something about the characterization of the characters that kind of throws me off.
Good use of grammar and details though, as well as creativity.
From, Comment person
P.S. Everyone is entitled to their own opinion.
| iheartgod175 chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
This is a pretty cute story. This reminds of the Jonah outtakes where Mr. Lunt was telling that bizzare story about his aunt being a lobster.
I didn't know you didn't support Larry and Petunia...oh well, to each his own opinion.