|Reviews for Roommates|
| Mirage chapter 15 . 1/14
Awww so cute -
But I think bevor a kitten she really needs to learn from a fish pro how to take care of fish that they life long time... so right water, temperature, fish and fish friends that work well together , right plants and food...
I mean ...poor kitten , would they flush it down too...
So maybe only a fat big lazy cat...there they can't do much wrong like with a innocent baby cat ;)
| Mirage chapter 14 . 1/14
I'm really happy that it there baby -
and not a baby from the Bastard and a you know what u did write bevor. ...I mean there areally bad guys who do this to woman and with how you did write that she could not remember anything and hurt all over ...it was a thought that could have been possible...
But I'm really happy that it was not. That it just was from a drunken idiot mistake night of this two silly ...that thwre did cime something of it that both do like ... and that syaoran did take care of her while pregnant,
.. and loved her and the baby even when unborn ...and all without knowing that he is the father too ...that shows that he really is a good guy -
| Mirage chapter 13 . 1/14
Wait wait wait...
She remembered something when the contraction started at there first kiss...
It is not the baby from the Bastard ...he did not rape her. ...? How...
And why did she forgot it ..?
It is syaorans baby? Am I right... Wow ...O-o
| Mirage chapter 4 . 1/14
I think they got the first step wrong...
Healthy food as third and sport as fourth step is good
...but first is...how did she got pregnant without knowing of having sex...not even small pictures of memory ...that is not right .. even when stone drunk I read people can remember small things here and there. ..only drugs don't let you.
And the second is...
Go the hell to a gynecologist and get yourself checked out... you need ultrasound and health and blood test and the mother pass...pimples to pregnancy and midwifes. .. and such thing
I mean she could not only be pregnant but sexual transmitted disease. ...that could be bad for her and child.
And this guy must be found out and caught when he really did force her whole unconscious
I so hope the doc askes her or health teacher talks about this sort of thing in school so that they finally start to think...
I really worry that it could be something like this...one never should go lightly about a whole memory loose ...and even more so for female...and about an event that leads to pregnancy. ...
| Mirage chapter 3 . 1/14
I think this two girls should ask them self a question. ...why does she not remember getting pregnant ...aka sleeping with a guy/ her boyfriend... This toji guy...did he rape her? I mean only a glass of wine and not knowing anything more after it and waking up alone and hurting all over the body...the head yes but body no...and the being pregnant witrout hacing sex ...knowingly ...that all sounds like date rape drug was in play...and over this she needs to think real real fast...
If yes then this guy is dangerous .
Even when she was k ocker out by one glass vine only... he still had sec with an unconscious person. ...and this is and will always be rape.
| charmedness19 chapter 16 . 11/17/2020
this was super sweet and cute!
| FairyTailLife chapter 15 . 4/14/2019
uGh fucking adorable. i started getting into ccs fanfics recently bc a) i was too young to know what fanfics were when og ccs came out and b) clear card came out and im all caught up so here i am trying to relieve my S&S cravinggs! mannn old date on this story but love aint ever get old UGH LOVE IT
| This Username Is Classified chapter 15 . 12/7/2017
I love this fic! At first it was a bit "meh" because Sakura was with Toji and like no thank you QvQ So I think that was understandable, right xD But I liked how the story progressed and this chapter was HILARIOUS. The dead fish omg I kenut even xDDD
| LindyWatson chapter 15 . 10/9/2017
It's nice story. It's sweet but really lucking in romance between Sakura and Syaoran.. Like they only kiss like once...
| Reader chapter 16 . 8/23/2017
This is all such a good fic! And I noticed that most of 2000s fanfics I've tends to have the characters being extremely out of character compare to the original show. But at least this one is passable(?).
Not to say this is bad, this fic is really great and wonderful! Love the natural interaction with the roommates and nice twist at the end. But I just can't see this as Sakura and Syaoran.
| gaarasgirl389 chapter 16 . 11/21/2016
That was quite refreshing for a CCS fanfic as it wasn't about the Clow cards, teenage drama or written terribly. That was a good story.
| xxFLaMiNG MiLCuTexx chapter 16 . 8/31/2016
thank you for the story. I managed to finished it off in tow hours straight. XD I would guessed that the baby was Syouran. To weird to be Toji. And I was anticipating to see Yukito but maybe he doesn't play much role here XD
| Quaver Ava chapter 6 . 9/22/2015
This story is not about Sakura, because she is too OOC in my opinion to be about the Sakura from Cardcaptor. I'm fine with AU's, however it frustrates me that many of the CCS fanfictions I've come across simply write her out of character. The straw that really turned her into a different character in this fic was her dislike for exercise. Writing, it's well enough to enjoy and I'll admit I've laughed a few times. You don't have any of the silly bits of attempted Japanese in this story that infuriates me when I read it, however, it also looks like they're simply in America and not Japan. An AU, so it's perfectly acceptable. It gives me hope when a mediocre story like that has such success. It's also been here for a few years as well.
I must say that I read it to here with a fair amount of interest. But unless it pulls some entertaining stuff in the next chapter I'll drop the story here. It's a nice fic and for those reading this review to see if they should read this story, do check it out yourself, but for my taste it's not as pulling as it should be. Aah... The tragedy of liking something, yet, finding it boring. Four years ago, I would have enjoyed this story tremendously, so take it as my maturer taste.
What I must say though is I'm interested in how your writing has developed and will see if any of your more recent tales catch my interest, if there are any recent stories.
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/25/2015
Artemis Fowl is pretty interesting...
| kori kaoru himura chapter 16 . 8/15/2015
I loved this! It was so funny and cute and romantic and we'll written and... many many amazing things! This story is definitely going to my favorites, thanks for sharing!