Reviews for Freedom Dream
Guest chapter 1 . 4/21/2015
This was really nice. The begining of it was very smooth, and it lead very well into the conflict. There were still a few problems, however. In this chapter, Mathew was left behind. I understand that. Other than that, the rest of the problems were grammatical. Congrats on writing a great beginning!
Xou chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
Hum... Maybe I should leave a review just to encourage the author? ...
Myself: You always don't know what to write on those... Don't you?
Me: Well Dear, you're in shit! :D
But I want to leave a review the story was good, even if it's just the beginning...
Myself: Don't you find it a bit patethic to just write that conversation? The author will think you're a weirdo...
Me: Don't you get it already Myself? Nobody is normal, there's just patethic human beings and psychotic ones! :D
... Why did I ask you two to help me out with the review again? -_-
Me: Duh! You love us!
Myself: I can't answer for a question you already know the answer for. That's patethic.

... Yup. That was my review.