|Reviews for A Forbidden Love|
| litanolastar chapter 35 . 12/6/2014
Nice Story! :)
| BkwrmDancer chapter 19 . 8/19/2014
That's not how family tuition breaks work. I think you have some really good ideas and you write well but it's too neat, everything just works out. I'm not saying there needs to be a ton of angst or anything like that, but stuff doesn't just work out that quickly. There' an inconsistency in your writing you'll go the lengths to describe clothes but don't research for plot points, it keep your story for attaining any depth and sometimes feels a little lazy. I think that can make the difference between a good story and a great story.
| BkwrmDancer chapter 18 . 8/19/2014
My biggest problem as I read this is the fact that you don't need a teaching license to teach at the college/university level you just need an advanced degree (masters or Ph.D). I say this as someone who has taught at a couple different universities in a couple different states, one if which happens to be WA
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 35 . 8/15/2014
Awe! Such a sweet story.
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 34 . 8/15/2014
Home n time for fireworks? Tanya had better be afraid if they
have anymore. They say you labor shorter with each baby...
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 33 . 8/15/2014
I figured it would be Bella or Ali...
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 32 . 8/15/2014
Maybe Ben sees something they don't yet?
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 31 . 8/15/2014
I'm pretty sure you have SOMETHING
up your sleeve.
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 30 . 8/15/2014
At least thy seem to have cleared this up nicely!
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 29 . 8/15/2014
Either Edward considers the guys their
brothers, or he doesn't. He can't make
Bella make a distinction like that.
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 28 . 8/15/2014
Someone being at the door that
early IS a little bit ... concerning.
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 27 . 8/15/2014
If he gets it for her birthday, it
might soften her reaction.
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 26 . 8/15/2014
I didn't think she was solo-teaching until
she has a semester as a TA! That is a lot
of pressure. She is a rough cookie.
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 25 . 8/15/2014
My brain went to LEIDERhosen. I'm such
a MORON! Usually, I'm the FIRST to think
pervertedly. Wow. I'ma ditz. LOL
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 24 . 8/15/2014
What does he want to find traditional clothes of the Alps? LOL