Reviews for Its Like My Own Little World
thesagaciousowl chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
The idea is very interesting—and fresh! But the universe is not settled yet, right? I mean, are they in D12? And, if there're in D12, why is "Finnick Jr." there?
Your writing is good and it flows well. I like the powerful sentences, like the ones at the end in her therapy. I just thought that maybe an older person would think like that …
Anyway, you should continue. Try to describe a little bit more about your universe. I personally enjoy canon-diverse stories ;D
Galinda3397 chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
Please do continue this! It's very interesting!