Reviews for Happiness Punch
XxlostwoodsxX chapter 7 . 6/13
What we don't even get the crews reaction! :0 well I guess it's fine sense your lemon was awesome, but it made me feel like a huge perv while reading it XD hahaha
Cassi0chan chapter 7 . 5/2
Okay, das war super!
Es gibt nicht viele, die Nami und besonders Luffy so IC schreiben können. :D
Deine FF hat mich wirklich begeistert!
Es war lustig, wie Luffy am Anfang Nami aus dem Weg gegangen ist und es sie in den Wahnsinn getrieben hat. xxD
Ich fand auch gut, dass du das Vorspiel so schön in die Länge gezogen hast. ;)

Vielen Dank für die tolle Geschichte. .

silas chapter 7 . 10/31/2014
good one, surely this deserved a sequel.
midnightscar17 chapter 7 . 10/28/2014
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 3 . 8/22/2014
? um it was ok but wheres the love?
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 2 . 8/22/2014
it look like nami will help luffy
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 1 . 8/21/2014
um was he mmmmmm i thought it masturbating yet that cant it
Isabel Prescot chapter 7 . 7/23/2014
Nooo! I wanted to know the reactions of the crew when they found out! Oh well, it was still great. Thanx for writing it :)
Isabel Prescot chapter 6 . 7/23/2014
Never would have thought I'd enjoy something so drawn out but it's done just right and I love it :)
Isabel Prescot chapter 4 . 7/23/2014
Blue eyes?! No way, Sanji!
Isabel Prescot chapter 1 . 7/23/2014
Well written. I look forward to completely reading this story :)
StrangelyEnough chapter 7 . 6/10/2014
I regrettably have not read too much LuNa, but I must say that this is the best one by far! Absolutely amazing work!
AnimeRomanceReaderXXX17 chapter 7 . 6/5/2014
This story is so nice! The bed scene is too mainstream! Hahaha I like it! #LuNa Your awesome!
Guest chapter 5 . 5/27/2014
Okay normally I don't ever review (I know, I'm a jerk) but this one was too good so I decided you deserved it. (You may feel honored. (kidding)).
First of all, I really like your writing style. The way your sentences are build, and your English wad pretty good. Just some mistakes here and there. That's for my grammar-nazi side.
Second, the story -apart from the lemons/limes - is awesome. I think you've got a great talent for plot-writing. As a writer myself, I know what it is to have frustrating problems.
Final, the lemons/limes part is really amazing written. I've never seen it that good. Mostly it's just like 'Luffy kisses Nami and the next he knew they were naked on bed, making love'. S you really describe it good. The idea with the blindfold i very good. I should try it XD.

Please continue to write.
Namidaga Ochiru chapter 7 . 5/9/2014
LOL I think you did a really good job. :) I think it's kinda sad that Luffy still doesn't know what they did, though. XD
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