|Reviews for Trapped|
| samuraistar chapter 1 . 1/28
That was awesome, but a word of warning...
The website people have rules about writing your stories in "script form" and even though you're not using the colons, this is definitely script form. I'd hate to see a good story get taken down (and you penalized) on a technicality, so if you want to keep this story online, I strongly urge you to change it to story form. If you want help, I'd be more than willing (especially since I only work PART-time, LOL). I'm new to the SPG fanfdom, so I'm still in the star struck phase and it's already getting pretty near to my heart. I'll also go ahead and be arrogant enough to tell you I think I'm pretty good at story form, so I could definitely help you if you want.
-samuraistar . *mrow*
| sapienlover chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Utterly delightful. Thank you!
| theherosdamsel chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
This is great! thank you so much again for writing it! I love it Oh, and I finished the pic I said i'd draw (I'll see if I can post it soon so you can see)