|Reviews for The Dragon and the Bow|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/13
Please, please tell me this isn't how you're going to make the Scottish speak. As someone from Scotland, this made me cringe.
| Sonderistic chapter 1 . 8/1
The detail in his story is amazing although sometimes it's a bit hard to read it because of the accents
| NightshadeLG chapter 5 . 6/30
If steely glares could kill then i'd be the No.1 on the Most Wanted page for murder. a LOT of murder.
| NightshadeLG chapter 1 . 6/30
Ok...Could have gone better... I DON'T CARE!
| SirMandokarla chapter 40 . 4/3
Well, that didn't deviate much from the original overall. That said, it was fairly well written. I wish there'd been more to it than a short romance at the beginning and a bit more teamwork in the arena, but I think it was handled well.
I appreciated all the callbacks to the books, especially Camicazi, which was more of a surprise than it should have been.
If nothing else, you've got my attention. I'll be taking a glance at Heaven's Light, which I'm sure has some interesting changes, and I'll definitely be giving a few more of your stories a chance. That goes double for anything in this series.
As was the case with Empathy, my biggest complaint was how closely the story followed the original, when I thought the combination would lead to greater changes. Even so, I enjoyed it. I'm quite certain Cold Wind will be much more exciting in its unpredictability.
| SirMandokarla chapter 28 . 4/2
Well, this is officially where the plot starts seriously diverging.
As for the talking dragon, I thought that was a callback to the original books, same for a couple of the other bits of Hiccup's history and things like that. Didn't realize it was a Smaug thing.
| devildogg237 chapter 13 . 3/31
I see that Jurassic Park ref!
| WarHusky2000 chapter 12 . 3/27
Ahh! The irony!
| WarHusky2000 chapter 9 . 3/27
Now this chapter is funny! Burning the cake! HAH! And a behind the scenes of a Viking town! I like it!
| WarHusky2000 chapter 8 . 3/27
| WarHusky2000 chapter 7 . 3/27
That song reminded me of The Hobbit's dwarves! Even though Hiccup stated that it was the Red Death's doing... *ahem* Smaug *ahem*
| dojomojo chapter 8 . 3/26
Gobber channeled his inner Barty posing as Moody
| SirMandokarla chapter 10 . 3/8
Hm. Seems like this whole conflict got resolved a little fast. I figured it'd be tied in with the whole dragon business. I hope effectively ending one story to start up another doesn't ruin the overall effect.
My biggest problem is how extremely fast Merida's change in opinion was. To start opening up, I understand. To suddenly start seeing Hiccup as handsome is an entirely other thing.
| SirMandokarla chapter 6 . 3/8
What the heck happened to Astrid? All of a sudden she's evil. Woah.
| Cocolarita chapter 14 . 2/12
Yay! toothless bae! OK... I'll stop rambling and go on with the story. Sorry mates!