Very interesting job on the new update, I hope to read more of this story a well as your MWDC fics.

So Mor'du is half man half bear kind of thing in this? Not a bad idea actually.

Things are getting interesting now, let's see how it will continue...

I need mooooore! This is fantastic!

I love this story. It just makes me smile. Please update as soon as possible, I am dying to read the next scene.

So I'm like rereading the story and...

"He had short, dark red hair and icy blue eyes, which were closed as he tried to ease his turbulent stomach, holding his knees to his chest."

WAIT WAIT JUST A MINUTE. COULD THIS BE MERIDA'S (and Hiccup's though I'm just hoping lol) KID? AN ANCESTOR MAYBE? HMMM. AND THE PERSON TELLING HIM THE STORY BE... FERGUS? :o WAAT.

As for the chapter... awesome development so far *_* Yeah, I got nothing else to blab about yeh.

I know that Merida and her family are Scottish, but you REALLY need to make them speak normally. It's an pain in the butt to not understand it. 'Like 'his.

Jeez that escalated quickly

Ooh this flowed very well!

humm, wow. I am liking this. Most fic generaly hapen post movie but you are daring to do a pre-movie set-up. I think there is a lot a potential and I will follow this story to see what you can do.

Good luck and good work.

You have just gained a new fan. Job well done, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh my stars those're some thick accents! I don't mind though, makes it all seem more like they're real people than book characters or movie characters

Lords of Thundera, you gotta love Elinor! She's how I'd be if I was surrounded by burtish men. I always love the part where she dragged her husband and the three lords back to the thrones by the ear. XD
Oh Merida, what have you done? Now what'll you do? And I'm guessing Toothless comes at night in the next chapter?-Peace Out! ;)

Please continue!

Bwahahaha. Way to fight with your brain Hiccup. Nice brawl.

Wow... Elinor is tough in this, and kinda reasonable. I really like it please update soon!