Reviews for The Dragon and the Bow
Her Head In the Clouds chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
This is beautiful so far, I will continue to follow! :)

Are you going to keep using the accent in the dialogue? I mean I get it, it makes it authentic and it really it is captivating to use it - I had to speak it for a bit to get more into it haha - but it will become frustrating to translate through in the future. Food for thought but I wouldn't really mind if u didn't because the story is still great.
Sean Malloy-1 chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
Interesting job, I hope to enjoy it.

Will Toothless be in this?

What other changes are you making other than Mor'du?

Mistake: "sae green" should be "sea green"
i-am-casass chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
Pretty good start, I can't wait to see how it turns out! Please update soon!
coldblue chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
Interesting.

I hope you contiune the story.
erica.phoenix16 chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
It looks olay!
Jokermask18 chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
Never seen either movies but good job. P.S. "tales of the Ultraverse" will be up soon.
CMR Rosa chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
This is a great start to a good story, I can,t wait for Merida and Hiccup to meet, will Merida other suitors still appear?
Infinite Freedom chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
Looks interesting so far.
Sunrise Phoenix chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
I like it! And the changes you made are awsome!
Merida is one of my favorite Disney Princesses; besides Belle, Rapunzel, Ariel, Aurora, Snow White, Tianna and Mulan. I love archery and Merida's SO SKILLED at it! Can't wait for next chapter!-Peace Out! ;)
DoktorK chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
So Mor'du is a human in this story. That already makes him sound like a more interesting villain!
bStormhands chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
This was a great intro.
hcsp1 chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
Good start. I liked the way you wrote their accent and I do want to see how it will eventually turn out.
Phygmalion chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
Hmmm... I like where you are going with this! It will be quite fascinating to see how you perform an amalgamation of these two universes. Great job, and looking forward to the next chapter!
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