Reviews for The Dragon and the Bow
supermage543 chapter 10 . 3/31/2019
Great work. Love the reference to nessie, Scotland's most famous resident
inFamousSlyMonkey chapter 40 . 3/18/2019
Reading through this again and God is it perfect!
Guest chapter 10 . 2/13/2019
sweetest scene ever!
Guest chapter 7 . 2/13/2019
oh shit at the start I thought this would be some generic lame shit, but boy was I wrong, the characterization is spot on, rly accentuates the Viking spirit way more than the animation for kids. Give me another reason to hate AStrid and think that this pairing should be cannon.
Guest chapter 6 . 2/13/2019
rly now, comparing Vikings to dwarves, Shameless!
dirtrevor chapter 35 . 12/31/2018
The part where Hiccup was leaving the temple was beautiful! No matter what happens, Hiccup has become Loki's champion. I am clueless as to who is Astrid's ancestor
dirtrevor chapter 33 . 12/31/2018
Hilde is Mor'du's mother. The came out of left field. Well done my good writer.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 12/8/2018
I don't understand a single thing that had just been written here but nonetheless, great book dude.
elizathe0dd chapter 4 . 11/25/2018
Queen Elinor is right, merida is being super selfish and self absorbed... kinda hate her character right now... hopefully she'll improve.
A.J.R chapter 1 . 11/18/2018
Congratulations your FanFiction stories is now on YouTube it’s called “10 fan fictions Disney crossover couples everybody ships” you made it my friend.
Emeraldknight727 chapter 17 . 10/11/2018
This was a good character chapter. We get to see how the group can function as a team. What really intrigued me was how these kids are starting to form new friendships. I love the depiction of the twins in this story. They aren’t just comic relief, but their own characters with strengths and weaknesses.
Guest chapter 28 . 10/6/2018
Absolutely love the story
Guest chapter 16 . 9/7/2018
I love this story. I really do. You have Merida down perfectly, and you're really close to hiccup as well. Your grammar is precise and top notch. The only suggestions I can make are just few cultural things that I would like to point out. Most prominent is the Viking swearing. While you're correct that the Norse people of Berk would spell hell as Hel, because of the deity of the same name, they would not say "what the Hel..." As that implies a place. Instead they would say "what in Hel's name..." Because Hel is a person not a place. Other minor notes are that Vikings in general did not use bows all that much, so Gobber knowing how to make anything beyond a standard longbow is a little strange and that as a relative of the chief, Fishlegs insulting Snotlout to his father is tantamount to treason to Berk or Stoik. The ramifications of doing this privately are admittedly not as bad as if he'd said them publicly but still.
Guest chapter 16 . 8/30/2018
This chapter brought a lot to the surface and really highlights your story over the film, making this its own story with the films as backdrop. I love the reveal concerning the “poor farmer.” This is a great mix of the books, the films, and your story and they all blend together really well. I also really enjoyed Hiccup’s backstory explaining why he wanted to be like all the other vikings despite his limitations.
Emeraldknight727 chapter 15 . 8/21/2018
I really like how you put your own stamp on this story. I like that Fishlegs has a family; it’s a bit dysfunctional, but much better than his parentage reveal in the books. I really enjoyed the first day of training, and how things work differently with the new elements. Plus, it was pretty fun seeing Fishlegs go all “berserk” when it came to saving his friends ;). I love how Hiccup is the one to learn the lesson of fighting together. Vikings seem to have a lot of ego despite needing to work together.
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