Reviews for Little Bird
Takuma-Elisabeth chapter 4 . 3/18
Please come back to this story!
rudeandveryginger chapter 4 . 9/30/2014
This is awesome! Please update soon!
xXJuuLXx chapter 4 . 2/16/2014
I really hooe your gonna continue this!
CapitaineHook chapter 4 . 1/25/2014
Please update! I freakin adore Ariella; she may be one of my favorite OFCs ever.
TheGoldenWritersApprentice chapter 4 . 1/14/2014
Update soon!
Secret-writer91 chapter 4 . 12/20/2013
I love your story and can't wait to see what happens next xxx
maria.gerbauletvanasse chapter 4 . 9/29/2013
This is really good! I really want to know what happens! Please update!
Blood Zephyr chapter 1 . 9/20/2013
Hobbit and elf?! How the heck does that work? Must have been a really tall hobbit and really short elf...
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
I really like this so far! Please update soon, I can't wait to find out what happens! :)
kage kitsune 14 chapter 4 . 7/1/2013
Update soon, please.
Treklocked Asgardian chapter 4 . 6/24/2013
I'm really liking this story so far :)
Dagdoth Fliesh chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
A critique if I may, because I'm very picky. The story is well written, but your OC is a Mary-Sue. It bothers me that she's taking lines from the Dwarves, has a perfect body, and the whole "half-elf" thrown in there just because (and honestly it's not at all original. There's about 20 other odd stories here dealing with elves and Thorin- - half breed or not). I guess I'm just tired of reading the same ol' stuff over and over again. I guess I wouldn't mind most of it if you had some explanation as to WHY she's part elf, because to me, just throwing things in like that doesn't make for a very convincing character.

But I'm happy you included descriptions from the Hobbit book, and kept it more towards the original.

Keep a writin'.
Just4Me chapter 4 . 6/22/2013
So Thorin is keeping an eye on her. I wonder how he's going to get over the "elf" thing.
Slake13 chapter 4 . 6/22/2013
I can't wait to read how you're going to build their relationship! I'm so glad you updated soo please, don't make us wait any longer (:
echoi5004 chapter 4 . 6/22/2013
This is great. I just started the series, and I'm really enjoying it. I can't wait to see how Thorin and Ari's relationship will develop. Can't wait for the next chapter(s). Please update very soon.
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