|Reviews for Battle For Your Heart|
| beth626 chapter 5 . 3/3
tx so much for the update! I can totally see how caius would be conflicted and he should be. to go from loving Athenodora whole heartedly to loving a human/stranger would throw anybody for a loop...love how bella is becoming stronger and more sure of herself
| Kennedy chapter 5 . 3/2
Please keep going with this story. I really like this. This is amazing and your writing skills are very good.
| KittyandKat chapter 5 . 3/2
I am so so so so so sorry that I didn't leave a review before this! I completely spaced! :O
This is just fantastic! Marcus finally showing some emotion and giving Caius hell about what he's doing to Bella is very creative! I simply loved it!
I admit, I am writing a Caius/Bella fanfiction myself and have lost all inspiration to write it, but I still enjoy reading it and I love your story so much! While the majority of them have her fall into his arms right away (and vice versa) (including mine) this story is different because the little kitten has claws :).
I'll admit, I'm super stoked to read about Athenodora's reaction to Caius having a mate? Will she become possessive? Will she insist on him going to be with her? Will she do whatever she can to destroy the bond? What's going to happen? If she's as great as Caius is making her out to be (let's be honest here, this is Caius we are talking about) then I personally think that she would push for Caius to accept his mating bond if it meant his happiness. If it's like most other C/B stories (and again, like mine) then she'll turn out to be a cold-hearted, cruel woman who doesn't care about what it takes to keep her crown.
It is as I'm writing this review that I realize just how much of a cliche that I'm writing. I should fix that. Actually, I was originally going to have a story similar to yours, when Caius completely blows her off, but my heart wouldn't have any of that.
Anyways, before I ramble on any longer, GREAT JOB! I can't wait to read the next update!
| huggiegirl2008 chapter 5 . 2/25
i love this story i cant wait to read the next chapter :)
| NCBUTRH-nologin chapter 5 . 2/24
I think Athenadora should find her true mate and leave Caius then he sees how much of a moron he was in this chapter (he sounded stupid in this chapter, nice work btw :) ) because it'd be pretty funny to see his world crumble around him. any ways nice fanfiction right here, update soon and if you don't want to don't rush :)
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| silversimon chapter 5 . 2/21
Caius should suffer greatly for his stubborn stupidity. Failure yo accept Marcus and Aro's warnings at the time he turned Athenadora. And his cruelty to Isabella in the face of his own actions in the "throne " room, and his brothers' advice. A real jackass! Don't let Isabella date some worthless human boy. She's got a true bond mate who will hopefully come to his senses soon. Glad you're back!
| silversimon chapter 1 . 2/21
So glad you and your foul, funny mouth have returned, that I'm re-reading ahead of the new chapter. Thanks.
| anna3311234 chapter 5 . 2/21
Oh my god! This is amazing! I love this story soooo much! Its a work of art! A masterpiece! Plz plz update soon i have to knw what happens next! I really can't wait to see what you do next to the story, please keep up the amazing and wonderful work!0:)
| toomanycats21 chapter 4 . 2/20
i can't wait to read more of it keep up the great job
| tee hill chapter 5 . 2/19
great chapter :-)))))))))))))))))
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/19
Amazing chapter. Hope you update soon.
| AnaBookWorm chapter 5 . 2/19
hey! Bella is no whore.
| kathymoonstone chapter 5 . 2/19
Omg! Reaaaalllly awesome chapter! Please pleaseeeeeeeeeaaaassseee update soon!
| JXB Addicted chapter 5 . 2/18
Is the mating bond not going to let him betray Bella? Is Aro going to go behind his back and make sure Bella has everything a queen deserves? Or will Marcus want to take care of Bella? Can't wait to find out! TTFN! JXB ;-}
| bellislefan chapter 5 . 2/18
caius needs a kick up the behind. hope it doesn't take him too long