|Reviews for For The Good of the Village: Hyuuga Arc|
| Def chapter 8 . 3/1
Dude Update Take What is Youts. How is Mizore and the Snow people doing. Also Add Real Graphic Lemon/Sex Scenes
| Kunohichi8 chapter 8 . 1/27
i love it, keep going please!
| Nate Grey chapter 8 . 1/26
Maybe I don't get out enough, but I've never seen Shadow Bind used quite that way. Or cloud watching, for that matter. Consider me impressed by Sneaky!Shika. I'm having even more trouble imagining Neji married to Temari now. Not that I ever really saw them together to begin with.
| ConscriptReporting chapter 5 . 1/23
So far both stories have been very good. I know you have said this story isn't naruhina, but so far it has been a great story from the naruhina point of view. Their development is nicely paced and believable. I am wondering what type of drama the Hyuuga will give the young couple.
I have not read your Dark influence wave arc as this is a rewrite, and do not want to spoil any surprises you might have for us that you might incorporate from your other story . I am looking forward to seeing Hinata's reaction if she is told who her potential father is.
Hope you feel better from your PTSD I know how it is been there done that. All you can do is soldier on, and talk about it with other veterans that have been there. Civilians never can understand so forgive them for their ignorance sometimes. I was in the Soviet and Russian army for 13 years including time in both Afghanistan and Chechnya.
| Dragon Man 180 chapter 8 . 1/23
Awww, I wanted to see what had Anko reacting like she did. It must have been good to make her lose her usual hyperactive behavior.
| flevantein chapter 8 . 1/23
Oh my God! This chapter really made my day. That's one of the most romantically funny in shika-tema ship ever. Really, the way you make shikamaru so easily rile up temari while hinting more possibility of romance later is just very nicely done!
Hope you keep posting next chapter soon...
| Spartan Ninja chapter 8 . 1/22
Ouch, we'll now that's a mood killer, isn't it. "Fate" is really fucking with everyone, now isn't. Go Shika though, you smartass.
| JOHNXgambit chapter 8 . 1/22
u turned shikamaru into a pimp awesome
| Andigatron chapter 8 . 1/22
Awww damn it... what happens to Anko!
And really nice Shika/Tema Scene!
Keep up the good work!
| birthdaychat chapter 8 . 1/22
The thing with Anko is getting me curious! Wonderful chapter as always!
| Zylus chapter 8 . 1/22
| Rose Tiger chapter 8 . 1/22
Welcome back. Keep going.
| SrgntDrew chapter 8 . 1/22
Another great chapter! I look forward to seeing what Anko was told and I just love the interaction between Shikamaru and Temari!
| zeonista13 chapter 8 . 1/22
Re Chapter 622: I don't think Sakura can duplicate Chiyo baa-san's final jutsu. That being said, I am kind of hoping for Hinata to hurry over & call Naruto back to life while Sakura heals him. As for Sasuke, I promise I won't cry any. ;)
Kakashi is still a bad, bad man for putting that idea into Naruto's head. Anko's a bit much for a young idealistic guy anyway. She's more suited for an older man with few(er) illusions about love but enjoying the delight of pain & pleasure mixed together. I'd like to know what made Anko so startled concerning the chuunin exams & her proctor status. (Although I do think I know the answer already. ;) ) Shikamaru as a flirt really made me smile, along with tsundere Temari.
| Ayrmed chapter 8 . 1/22
Some nice Shika and Temari time.