Reviews for For The Good of the Village: Hyuuga Arc
Tare-chan chapter 18 . 8/24
oh wow... this second book was rather dark. political issues here and there... there was so many aspect of clans that could be explored, if only Kishi had cared to explore it. I'm curious to read next part. what would happened to Hinata now? to Naruto? to Neji? btw, I tought Neji's hatred already tamed, with all those stories shared by Hiashi, but apparently, I was wrong. He was so tottally cruel towards Hinata, but somehow, I think there was a purpose there as stated by Sasuke and Gaara...
SakuraKoi chapter 18 . 1/29
Slashing chapter 3 . 12/31/2016
Don't know if you ever check reviews for these stories anymore but I have to say I did NOT see that one coming lol
bh18 chapter 3 . 11/7/2016
HOLY SHIT, I did not see this coming! Well done Ma'am.
Phoenixx Rising chapter 18 . 10/18/2016
Oh, my heart is broken for Hinata! And poor Naruto.
ChimamireNoBara22 chapter 18 . 3/10/2016
Onto part 3! This really took a drastic turn...can't wait to see where this goes :D
Neon and the Lost Soul chapter 13 . 2/4/2016
Ooohhh God...ohhh yeah...


That orgasmic thing that never ends...blood will be shed...tears also will be shed...yet in the end,the streets will only be red... friend. It's been to long.


Neon and the Lost Soul.
AngeDREAMS chapter 18 . 8/7/2015
OMG ITACHI! Haha, it's so intense, with all the monsters leashing out and fight and oro and itachi coming back... It seems like the code black is really something grim and serious. And Naruto here is sooo dark. But pretty badass haha. I like the twist in your stories and the way you portray it. I thought u r going to be on hiatus or something, with all the writer's block and something... But you didn't, so thank you to The Lord Of The Fire for supporting you and thank you as well for sticking close to your principles, and force yourself to write it yo satisfy our curiosity. Wish you all the best for your new story! Now I am more convinced to stay on with this series, and start reading your other series as well! Keep writing!
AngeDREAMS chapter 3 . 8/5/2015
HAHA FATE. IT'S ALL FATE! the twist is so hilarious, for the whole of the first arc I srsly thought that Hinata was the one that's going to get married and now..THE TWIST IS REAL I wonder how Neji's gonna react. You completely fool us and lure us! Haha, it's so funny!
jcampbellohten chapter 17 . 5/6/2015
Well, shit. For both Hiashi and Itachi.
jcampbellohten chapter 16 . 5/6/2015
I couldn't think of the right word before, but I never would have thought Shikamaru to be so... chauvinistic. Also, lmao at Anko's last line.
jcampbellohten chapter 14 . 5/6/2015
Sh!t is getting SO out of hand.
jcampbellohten chapter 12 . 5/6/2015
jcampbellohten chapter 8 . 5/6/2015
When did Shikamaru get so mega-ultra-smooth and forward? By the way, it says he made her lean forward and "share another brief peck," but they didn't kiss before that, they were just cheek-to-cheek before. At the most it says they almost had the corners of their mouths touching at one point.

I hope Neji isn't going to get so jealous and/or spiteful that he becomes an antagonist here.
jcampbellohten chapter 3 . 5/6/2015
o.o Lol! Also, I find it far more significant now that the girls at Kiba's, Shikamaru's, and Chouji's destinations appeared to be starting to have feelings for said boys.

Shikaku didn't introduce himself and whom he was representing.
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