Reviews for Obsessed
Guest chapter 1 . 5/28
Hi. :) Welp, I'm not gonna lie I really liked this story. But to me, it felt a little unpolished. Like the fact that Riddle cast that spell when Harry was 12 years old and 7 years later it would make him 19, not 17. And a 19 year old Harry would still have the mindset of 12 year old Harry, that makes it too near to pedophilia for me. Also Hermione would be 19 too. And 2 children at that age for a woman like Hermione... I'm sure you get what I'm talking about. Yeah, these mistakes cut me off from the story, but you really have a lot of potential. I'm aware that this was written in 2013 and you really improved your writing style. :D I'm a fan of the "By The Grace Of" series, really enjoyed that. 3 I'm just saying that a half fic like this shouldn't stay in this form on the archives of a writer like you. Hope I didn't offend you, with my best wishes dear. Good bye. :) 3 3
halfblood hufflepuff chapter 1 . 8/30/2016
Despite the happy ending, Tom is still creepy LOLOL he kidnaps Harry and forces him into a coma for seven years! And even afterwards he wouldn't let him go XD
Poor Ginny aw but at least now everyone is better off
Lucinda Silver chapter 1 . 6/2/2016
I adore this one shot! It was very cute somewhat and adorable! But I was wondering about the fate of Dumbledore... perhaps it best he wasn't involved? I don't know, ahh!

Great job, author!
claire1663 chapter 1 . 5/12/2015
thank you for your story.
all the best
FalconLux chapter 1 . 3/5/2015
Slightly twisted, but intriguing. The diary was clearly the superior Voldemort.
LunarisDraconis chapter 1 . 1/2/2015
who the bloody hell puts someone to sleep for 7 years
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
Nuooooo Sirius is still in Azkaban! !
Tobalerone chapter 1 . 11/9/2014
How the Fuck is Harry ok with this?! Like who gives a Fuck what Tom did as Minister or whatever, HE STOLE 7 FUCKING YEARS OF HARRY'S LIFE! Then he just expected Shit to be fine and dandy when he literally took away Harry's will for like 7 years! You should have really stressed the angst of having his life stolen, and then showed a long span of time where Harry like hates Tom for what he did, regardless of how good a leader he is (speaking of, how were the Weasley's ok with Ginny dying?). Like sure, they can get together in the end, but its going to be a long, tedious road and they're relationship will doubtlessly be fucked up. I do like the idea of possessive/obsessive Tom, and sure it's even fine and believable that Tom would put Harry to sleep (though it still pisses me off) but he should NOT have gotten off the hook that easily
ripper34 chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
Good story
yr1104 chapter 1 . 8/29/2014
Awwww! So cute ! I like it a lot! This was really sweet and creepy and just included a lot of powerful emotions without being overbearing.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/28/2014
0.0
Dream Bound Nightmare chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
i liked it
annabelle chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
Even if harry was 17 when he woke up, he mentally/emotional was still 12. So I fid the whole "petting" of his sleeping body really creeepy I mean he should have been way more upset/ confused. (hormones he never adapted to ) I think this wold have worked better with more scenes to show the base of the relation ship. I mean Harry was sleeping through most of it. and then we have a time skip past relearning fricken school... it was rushed :P
XxXSmiles101XxX chapter 1 . 7/3/2014
Aww sweet and a little creepy in some places. Well done :)
deletedgonenomorewritingbyebye chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
Laughs, even though it's probably not a healthy interest, especially at the beginning since Harry was just 12—gosh! I still adore obsessive/possessive Tom. Hmm it'd be kind of fun to read from Tom's pov, what sort of thoughts would he have and motions he'd go through while "correcting" the Wizard world and taking care of Harry.
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