Reviews for There Was Never Any Doubt
SaberAureum chapter 12 . 6/11
Oh God! You're sixteen?! And yet you right so well and in full detail. The story is very nice and I love how it ends. I also like the fact that Alicia has a twin sister, clever you!
Anonymous chapter 12 . 7/26/2013
I just died. Great story, just really sad, im crying
ofJohnlockandTea chapter 12 . 7/23/2013
ohhhh I love this fic, it has a bit of everything and your writing is great. I had to count to ten at the end of chapter 11 before going to the next one, I don't know what I expected, but not this. This is way better than anything.
Thank you for writing this story i will recommend it to lots of my friends.
Guest chapter 12 . 6/23/2013
OK THIS IS SO NOT OK! I READ THIS IN CLASS THINKING YAY ITS SHERLOCK SMUT AND FLUFF SO I WONT BAWL MY EYES OUT. BUT IT WASNT AND I DID AND NO JUST NO IM SORRY BUT PLEASE I LOVE YOUR WRITING AND I NEVER WANT TO STOP READING IT BECAUSE IT IS SO AMAING BUT YOU HAVE TO STOP WRITING SAD FANFIC BECAUSE I AM CRYING SO MUCH AND ITS NOT GOOD SO PLEASE DONT. But you do have amazing writing so never stop but please write less sad things or i will have to personally come over and shove rainbows and fanfic fluff/smut into your brain. Ok? Ok.
EJ 12212012 chapter 12 . 6/20/2013
Oh man...this was beautiful. You said sad ending, and when Sherlock went all cold and distant... Oh God. I thought that was the ending was much more John and Sherlock. Ugh. I hate Moriarty.
Berylbatch chapter 8 . 6/19/2013
I hate the fact i have to stop because i have to go out! i must finish this, so i will do that tomorrow instead of productive things! damn your writing is so damn captivativng! more stories please! you have yourself a fan! loe it loe you! (my key stopped working, sorry!)
Mckenzie chapter 12 . 6/17/2013
i absolutely loved this whole story, and i knew Sherlock was lying when he said it was just an experiment, it has been amazing to read except the end made me cry :'( the whole thing was beautiful! i love how close and truly in love sherlock and watson are! i enjoyed it and hope to read more. this is the kind of thing i have been looking for! I LOVE YOU FOR CREATING THIS, YOU CANT UNDERSTAND HOW MUCH I ENJOYED IT!
Guest chapter 12 . 5/24/2013
Oh my god, I've never cried so much in my life...
Guest chapter 12 . 4/22/2013
LITERALLY SOBBING OMFG
LadyRouge15 chapter 12 . 3/29/2013
Extremely sad and heart aching but beautiful and so very worth the read and pain. Brillant plot, amazing story.
123AKM456 chapter 12 . 3/13/2013
Horrible, the Feels. That ending was one of the best sad endings I've ever read for their characters. Not that I want them to die or anything but at least they were together at the end. Brava! Brava!
The Girl Who Wanders chapter 12 . 3/10/2013
Oops, I think you just crushed my heart. Nice Job.
emmish chapter 12 . 3/3/2013
Ah, I saw that coming...heart-breaking *_*'''''''
Polly chapter 12 . 2/24/2013
OMG HANNAH THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL I'M CRYING! I forgive you for killing them because you did it so perfectly but OH MY GOD THIS BETTER NOT BE TRUE. Love you and please make more, you're a brilliant writer and captured the story so amazingly :) xxxoooxxx
L-E chapter 12 . 2/24/2013
ok that was uncALLED FOR. I knew it was going to happen but why would you do that, cries softly.

Basically that was rly rly good.
You captured the character's speech especially well at points, I could imagine them actually saying the lines you wrote - which is great because sometimes people write things in fanfictions that I have to mentally change slightly because it's just not something the character would say, or it's close but not quite there, whereas with yours I could just read it and hear their voice.

The one thing I would comment on would be how, although I completely understand why the end came about so quickly as there wasn't really time to act because, nearing the end, their actions became very sudden and there obviously wasn't the time to spare, I would've liked it to be somehow prolonged because with the rash movement of the plot my emotions didn't really get the chance to be torn apart by their ending. (Okay, as torn apart as I'd have liked.)
This might have been because of the two weeks spent not speaking was quickly brushed over, and made it seem a bit more rushed?

but, after saying all that, that was really great and you did punch me in my heart, you really made me ache for John Watson and his broken heart and just generally want to reach into the story drag the two together and shout 'KISS AND MAKE UP!' while uncontrollably sobbing.

so yeah, well done Hannahful on your first 'proper' (posted) fanfiction!

sorry about the review, I was trying to put my finger on the fast-paced bit but I did it badly.
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