|Reviews for Lap dance|
| derektomlinson chapter 1 . 10/17
lol videl saying to sayianman no you was not a good boy you are my bad boy nerd that will not your penis inside my pussy i mean it son gohan stop taking your penis out of my pussy
| derektomlinson chapter 1 . 9/17
videl hissing saying to gohan slap that's for not seeing that i wanted to be your gf since the day we met now i am not done with you yet I am going to ride my boyfriend penis all night long
| Derek chapter 1 . 5/2
Gohan to videl now that we are bf and gf you can give me lap dances anytime you want to
| gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 3/16/2016
Wouah c'était chaud je suis totalement chaud j'adore une suite VVVVVVVVVVVVIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEE.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/25/2014
BEST LEMON EVER
| boboleta chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
Oh, my, Mr. K. That last sentence was gold! "Yes, you were, Gohan. A very good boy." xD
I have to say you shine through every damn lemon you write. This is my favorite thus far. The lap dance and the actual fucking... It was awesome and amazingly described, which is a must for me when it comes to lemons.
I love the raw, liberated gohan but I have a feeling that beer did its magic in that regard. XD Luckily! This was incredibly hot from the get go, and I loved the fact that you put gohan admiring the stripper's "assets". XD He is a man, after all. And a horny one as we came to realize.
Yet another masterpiece. Keep'em coming!
| finallyexploded chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
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| Trunksmybaby chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
that was hot! it took me forever to read it because I had to keep pausing but it was really good!
| Brii-chan14 chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
And this is how Pan was born :D
Good job and nice lemon.
| angel.nieves.1656 chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Man this was so good LoL. It peaked my curiosity and once I started reading it I couldn't stop. You made it very detailed and descriptive and it was totally amazing. Saw some of the other comments and I can't wait to read some of your fics :]
| serenityselena chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
oh my... what a HOT night for Gohan and Videl :)
| romanovascap chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
I like it and it's also different because in this story they weren't together unlike the other 2 where it was post Buu and they were Boyfriend and Girlfriend already.
| SierraLarson chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
-w- That was nice. Nice and hot.
In the beginning, I had a feeling they actually were going do it in the club. I'm so glad they went to a private place. Or, at least private in the watching area. Not so much in the hearing area. XD You know, while reading this, I imagined Erasa and Sharpner listening from outside.
Also, seems like they were on the floor. I pictured them standing up though. .-. What position were they in? While they were actually having sex.
But yes, this is good. Really good. -w- vererberbegtbnrgjmrsgjnrsygf d
| Zon Yokai Blade of the Spirits chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
nice i loved it
| DarkVoid116 chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
All righty now. This was a really good lemon Kaleb, excellent stuff.
You know I was super excited for the plot and everything, and I really liked Videl's character in this. It was pleasantly different than the usual Videl while still maintaining the key characteristics that make Videl, well, Videl.
Gohan was more assertive and seemingly less naive than the usual canon Gohan which brought to the table new elements for their relationship.
I thought the sex was moderately tasteful yet at the same time pure smut, which is a really good balance. There was straight up sex and also foreplay, cool stuff like that, etc.