Reviews for Killer Instinct
percy zoe and artemis fan chapter 1 . 4/1
Great chapter and Naruto has to escape the Land of Fire Now.
Assassin Ninja chapter 2 . 3/21
yOU ARE really good at what you do
Guest chapter 1 . 3/21
MickDunD chapter 1 . 3/18
Update soon!
The Kamereon chapter 8 . 1/23
Kurama jinchuriki, can control wind and blue fire without handseals .( nidaime water still needs seals ?)
Senjutsu, infiltrate konoha and and escape twice, raikage apprentice. All he needs is a summoning contract :) i would like to recommend the chameleon clan (shiromari) the chameleon that could change into anything. For instance becoming a tornado chameleon. Invisible anything. Damn sorta like a hozuki for all of being. Hoho a zetsu!

4 jinchuriki 2 perfect 2 not so perfect, 4 hyuugas to recreate the clan on kumo lands. Raikage must have bern blessed by kami.

The balance has been tipped. Konoha wouldnt stay idle in this. Surely they must have had counter measure for this .e.g capturing missig jinchuriki from other countries such as utakata. Or sealing the sanbi like canon did.
what about yagur chapter 8 . 1/23
What happen to mist in this story?, are they having a civil war?
Isnt yagura being control by obito
If they are. Then konoha could recover saiken 6th or sanbi.

Hmm this mission.. Is probably a big one. Either going konoha and inherit the scrools. Or sending him away to a suicide mission. Probably recruiting bloodlines from mist purge. Great story mae
WeberCode chapter 8 . 12/31/2014
Sequel , please
246vili chapter 8 . 12/24/2014
I'm happy to see you updated this story. It has been more than a year since I read this fic. Almost forgot about it. Good thing you didn't forgot to update it :D
Hope you update soon. Can't wait to find out what mission will A give to Naruto. Oh, and what about Konoha? I guess they would try something to get Naruto back, since his heritage is revealed, not to mention if they find out Kumo has 4 jinchuriki they might get afraid since that will mean Kumo has the muscle.

Oh one more thing: I hope you have a nice Christmas and a Happy New Year.
Guest chapter 8 . 12/21/2014
you are focusing too much on the battles and missions you need more character to character interaction especially with the other intened harem girls with naruto this is important because at this rate i don't see any relationship blossoming at all so maybe make the mission you are about to send naruto on quick and maybe focus on training with the girls or something were naruto is seen, by the reader, interacting with the girls so the relationships that will blossom can actually seem natural to the reader because relying on background thought distances rhe reader from the developing emotions and just makes it seem like they woke up one day and said i am going to share a guy with 2 other girls no please no bring the other members of the harem close enough for frequent inter action we see so we can tell that they develop a love strong enough that they are willing to share him
hughfj08 chapter 8 . 12/7/2014
Noooo, cliffhanger.
You bastard.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/29/2014
fuck you, you friendless psycho freak only a twisted bastard would come up with this pile of shittof a story
Naruto.GOD chapter 8 . 10/28/2014
Update soon or I will be forced to track you down.
DarkPirateKing69 chapter 8 . 10/19/2014
never seen Naruto going proper Super Saiyan before, so that's cool :D any JInchuuriki transformations he has are just cheap knock offs.

so.. when exactly Kumo considere their ninja to be adult enough to have sex legally? in a world where children, starting fomr the age of 5 can gets their license to kill/murder/steal/maim/torture/blacmail/whatever?

not saying that Naruto should get any before turning 13 at least and growing taller so at least he doesn't look like a little kid anymore.

looking forward to the next one :D
DarkPirateKing69 chapter 7 . 10/19/2014
this chapter left me kinda confused about how much Taki actually knows about the attackers/invaders in the end.. and what conclusions they came to. oh well, i'm sure that will be expanded upon later.
DarkPirateKingV2 chapter 5 . 10/19/2014
oh ye, i was supposed to add this..

that 'i owned it' makes no sense in this context.. and it sounds really silly to my ears at least. outside of online fps community, it's just potent contraceptive when used in public. maybe 'embraced' would be better word in this case? same goes for Naruto's next few lines.
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