Reviews for Watching
gkmoberg1 chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
As fans of Hunger Games, we Readers know what's coming. Thus the enticement for us are these characters - your original characters - one of whom sits in horror and awaits the doom that he is increasingly certain will befall this girl who had pricked an interest within him... and one who is too young to fully understand. And so our emotions in reading this are bound up in how the death will play out upon them - Tara's innocence likely being torn up by the cruel system forced on her world, and Eamon's coming anguish over what could have been and the cruelty that has snatched her away. This story cracks all this open and leaves us to contemplate. - Spellbinding, and very well done!
cindella204 chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
Oh, gosh. Great sense of urgency.

Oriondruid chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
That was so well written, so sad and one of the most original stories about Foxface (Finch's ?) death that I have ever read. Wonderful stuff, well done.
Many Blessings.
Oriondruid, (John).
hpfanJade chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
This story is very intriguing. I love how you limited the information given to the reader to create suspense. Very well written.